Lovely. I like how your wrote Apollo. Sometimes people write him too uke-ish, but you didn't which makes me happy. Nice job!

Nononononononono you CAN'T end it there! (Sorry if it sounded like I didn't like it...)

It needs to go on! It can't just end with a kiss...there has to be more! More, I say! 8D;;

(Er, if you didn't get it, I really really really like it and would like more. Please? 8D; )

"[He] couldn't lie to himself; he quite enjoyed the ride . . . "
Oh, I'm sure he did.

OMG, I blushed throughout the whole thing. You're so good at this!

This is so cute!! I love it!

Aw. So sweet. -Tear- xD

Hurray for Trucy's nosyness!

aw so cute!

It's so sweet it shouldn't be allowed to exist. :>

x3 Aw... I'm dying at the thought that this was written for me and, and it's so sweet and cute and... *coherent thought dies* That's it, I'm writing one for you too! ^_^ ~