Amazingly touching! Wow, the Poet was wise beyond her years, I suppose. This just makes me feel for George!
Loved this line: “Would you rather he had to bleed like this for you?”

What a very wise and articulate twelve year old. Or was she older than she looked?

What a very interesting and unusual piece.

If you want the mystery poet to be British then you've got two quite large Britpicks - we say pavement not sidewalk, and undertaker not mortician. But I suppose there's nothing to say she's not an American expat (or whatever she is).

Wow. This was beautiful, so much so in fact that I'm outraged this hasn't got more reviews. I'll be plugging this in my next update, because you even managed to make her lyrical speech sound plausible. I loved the part about being the lucky ones, because it's so in-canon. My favourite line? “Makes no sense, like the ends of rainbows" because it's true. Well done.

This. Was. Brilliant!
I think the poet was amazing, reminded me a bit of Luna, but (if so) a bit more off beat than even her.
The Zero-Coke referance was hilarious.
I think that's an amazing idea, of him being the guardian of Fred's heart.
Once again, brilliant job.

Wow. That was gorgeous. Wonderful job.

How old was she really supposed to be?

I have to say that this was a pretty powerful scene. I liked it, it was sad and kinda hard to read, but it was just... powerful. Good insight.


~*Phae*~

You know, I really loved this. So very beautiful and sad, and I loved your modern little poet. The cigarette and the "zero-calorie Coke" line were great touches.