aw that was so sad :(
good job, I need a tissue...

Good wording and descriptions.
I enjoy the originality in the story ^^ although it is somewhat distrurbing in its graphic content. haha

this story is amazing. favorite yuri fanfic as of now.

This one is really great! It is sad... I was just thinking about the other one. But I love it... you've got some skills. Nice work.


-mDX

love this story
its really sad.

That was just so... quiet and beautiful, while being very disturbing. Lemon was good, but the emotional impact was the most impressive thing. Grammatically perfect. What's it a cross-over of, though? I'd imagine I could understand more if I knew.