Please tell me your gonna update this?


Kia

Oh Shite...

K

Yay,yayayayaayayaya Jason! Way to-go. WHO


Kia

leaving me hanging like that is not nice.


Kia

his beautiful and brave woman

Love that phrase.

I also love this part

Carly pulled him down, pressing her mouth firmly to his. She couldn’t hear any more. See him in pain any more. She could give him this. Reassurance. She was still here. She still needed him. Still loved him. She felt his lips tremble with emotion against hers, but she held on, deepening the kiss, her mouth opening under his as his hand cupped the back of her head. His mouth taking hers with a gentle mastery. A sweet but powerful affirmation that nothing had changed. And that nothing would.

I can't believe you updated this! I must have read it a million times one hotzone and wondered if anyone will ever update their stories and you did! (doing happy dance) Your story is awesome, but I need an update!

I'm glad to see this story updated. I look forward to reading more of it.

Part of him felt some satisfaction in the fact that he had worn her out enough last night to keep her in bed so long the morning after.

Carly tried to glare up at him, she really did, but settled for a smirk as he leaned in for a kiss.

these two lines made me laugh. glad to see a lighter side to JC after dealing with what almost happened the night before.

Carly's gut is right more often than not, glad to see she trusted her instincts and told Jason what she thought about the banana and more importantly, so glad that Jason didn't just brush off her concerns as jealousy.

At least Taggert was impartial when it came to AJ, can't believe he was stupid enough to think he'd get Carly and Michael back just like that.

and Michael is finally back with his father, where he belongs...

I love how well they know each other, how Jason just knows what Carly needs and how she knows what he's thinking and neither of them have to say a word.

How could she have ever thought that getting this man to drink again was a good idea? He destroyed everything around him. And apparently, she was next.

I like this part, Carly acknowledging her hand in AJ's downfall and that she would be part of the fallout.

love these lines: Any time she was in trouble, his control snapped & As long as she had Jason, she would be all right.
it's so true.

so glad Jason got their before AJ raped her, I know they would've worked through it but it makes it easier for them not to have to.

I love how you write Jason and Carly, how you get all the nuances of their relationship.

*LOVE* the pool table scene

oh great...why does AJ have to start interfering with things that don't concern him, like Carly. I'm confident that Jason will get to Carly before it's too late..hopefully...

wow...that was beyond hot...intense and hot...that's jason and carly. I am beyond glad that AJ is not married to Carly, and there's still time to fix her plan before it backfires.

Jason the voyeur...lol...was it seeing Carly in her teddy that made him realize she was his? I do love a possessive Jason.

I'm really hoping AJ stays away from her room tonight.

love it!!

Great chapter and I so can't wait to read the next one. Question what is hotzone you said something about it in your authors note. Is it another fanfiction site. Agian please post more when you can.
Tanya

I hate AJ and I loved the last couple of chapter. Sorry I did not review till now have not been on the last couple of days. You are doing a fantastic job. Kee up the amazing writing and please post more when you can.
Tanya