Really good well done
tac

when did you start shipping george and katie? did i miss something?

this started off really well, but i think you need to go back over the last third and edit it a little, it didnt really flow as well.

good story though

catch up soon
xox

cute!

Aw haha, that was cute. I got a bit confused at some parts, but I liked it a lot. Good job :)
--Quafflepunchers

aw long time no see! Lovely work, as usual. We can't help but love any of the twins.

Sweet story. Though I'm sorta lost when Katie and Fred went out. Did they develop feelings for each other eventually or something?

This was very cute, and I like the timeline of the story. The only thing I would fix is a few spelling errors and typos here and there, but other than that I very much enjoyed this story!

aww I loved this!

This was a great fic.
I really liked how their realationship was just kind of slow, and realistic.
Great job!
:-)
p.s. i love your writing style... hehe.

This was absolutely wonderful. I quite like the way you had their relationship progress, although I can't believe George was too daft to see Fred and Katie were just trying to make him jealous. Love the ending, I found myself liking those curls just as much as Katie, haha.

-everly

I can guarantee that I've not lost any interest in your writing since your last piece. This was brilliant! The only constructive criticism I have to give are a couple of incorrect usages of "your/you're."

Other than that, this was most DEFINITELY well worth the wait, and I await my chapter as soon as you get around to it! :D

Great job!

~100-percent-HP-obsessed

sque =)

you're back! and amazing!!

i love george in this. seriously. he's fantastic, & you write him so well! i've been falling in love with george lately, despite my previous obsession with fred...i almost love both of them equally.

i posted a story for you by the way =)

I'd have to disagree about "your really only real relationship". She never actually had one. :\ Poor George.