yes that was good write more good stuff please

yes! please write more, i beg of you... it was so good, i loved it!

You so have to add more I love it

Please continue. It's really good and i want to read more.

i think you should add to it. it seems to be going somewhere

hope you continue...this is good

PLEASE POLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! IT'S GOOD I WANT MORE I BEG YOU TO CONTINUE! hee hee hee 'and it was such a good dream too..' lol

This is really good

My fav part was the whole dream thing, that was great

And I do think you should make more chapters

Keep up the good work!

Hahahaha i think i feel outta the chair i was sitting in. Wow that was awesome. I would like to see a follow up but if not it sits well on its own. fucking funny.

Oh please write more this is so great so far.

that was freakin awesome. if you can continue the story, that would be great. i wanna read you ideas.