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| angels-songwriter 2008-07-07 ch 16, | abuseI've just read this entire thing at once. Did anyone ever tell you that you're brilliant? I'm sure they have..I'm just checking. JUDE/MAX IS MY OBSESSION and you are fulfilling my slashy boylove goodness perfectly! My favorite bit was Jojo walking in...although I spent most of that thinking, "What I wouldn't give to walk in on that." I'm not very good at reviews but let it be known that you are insanely genius. Yes, I noticed the move towards the 70s at the end. I think that was done on purpose, showing that life moves on... |
| InvaderLii 2008-05-17 ch 18, | abuseAW! Cute as always ny friend! This made my very depressing day better. Thank you! *hugs* |
| darksmile23 2008-05-15 ch 11, anon. | abusesniff sniff, aww poor luce |
| darksmile23 2008-05-15 ch 5, anon. | abuseo intense |
| YaneDirnt20 2008-05-13 ch 18, | abuseAww..I thought it was a cute chapter...I actually thought that Michelle might have pimp slapped Max, but obviously that didn't happen...and yeah, you're not the only one who thought that. |
| TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 2008-05-13 ch 18, | abuseGah. The conflicting emotions in my head are killing me. Max and Jude should have their love, but at the same time I feel horrible for Michelle and Lucy. Particularly Michelle, because she didn't see it coming. The confrontations were written well, luv! Don't be so ** yourself. There was enough dramatic tension to make it realistic, but not too much to make it eye-roll worthy. Nice work, update! |
| DarkPhoenix1987 2008-05-13 ch 18, | abusei dont think they said "kick me to the curb" in the 1970s but i still love it lol i think this chapter was very good, very sweet ending to it. |
| Dubious.Mischief.Maker 2008-04-29 ch 17, | abuseaw! |
| Dubious.Mischief.Maker 2008-04-29 ch 16, | abuseAH! Smooth move, Jojo. you owe me $50, too. :D well, if you're going to write any smut, you should put a warning up at the top or rate the story appropriatley. If there are any scenes like that, it should be an M. But it was still a great chapter. :D |
| Dubious.Mischief.Maker 2008-04-29 ch 15, | abuse! YAY! FINALLY! Aww, Max is such a cutie when he's shy. :D too bad Judie stole him. ^_^ haha. I love the way you portray the characters. Prudence is dead on. |
| Dubious.Mischief.Maker 2008-04-29 ch 13, | abuseI almost cried when Jude started to cry. That was so sad! and I've been very bad with reading updates lately... ^_^;; It was a good chapter though. |
| YaneDirnt20 2008-04-28 ch 17, | abuseAww..this chappy was soo cute...It's okay that you haven't wrote in a while...everyone has their breaks...I mean, I've been on a brake for at least a year...hehehe...anyways...great chappy and I can't wait to read what happens with the exes...! |
| SiriusLovesRent 2008-04-28 ch 17, | abuse-gasp- IS THIS AN UPDATE?! WOWZA! Haha, just kidding. I should be talking. It once took me four months to update a fic. Yeah. ANYWAY. THIS REVIEW IS ABOUT YOU! AND HOW AMAZING YOU ARE! AND HOW AMAZING YOU ARE AT WRITING ALL OUR FAVORITE BOYS! AND HOW AMAZING THIS FIC IS! THIS IS JUST GONNA BE AMAZING! Favorite part: Max grunted. “Fine. If I have to.” “You do.” “Well, I could name an extreme amount of things to love about you, but c'mon, that's a little bit girly--” “Your bloody ** made me do it for you--” Jude interjected, but it went by ignored. “--so I'll just tell you the number one thing about you that makes me a complete person.” Max shifted his body, so that he was face to face with Jude. “You see, when you get uncontrollably happy, you grin. But sometimes, you get so happy, the grin just keeps getting bigger and bigger. And then... you bite your lip.” Jude's eyebrows furrowed. “What?” “It's when you bite your lip when you're grinning.” Max shrugged. “Seriously, you have no idea how adorable that is.” Seriously, you have no idea how adorable that is :D THAT WAS SO CUTE! That whole exchange just made me smile! THANK YOU! Oh my god, could they BE any more adorable? Damn. If they got any cuter, we all just might explode. I definietly am pumped for the next chapter. It shall be very interesting! I love stuff where they face their exes and whatnot. I'm so weird like that. So like, you HAVE to update soon, before I go insane! Did I mention I wait on these updates? Well I do. By the way: ADORED ADORED ADORED this chapter! Update soon, mmk? Promise? Sooner then last time? Like...now? Perhaps? XD |
| DarkPhoenix1987 2008-04-27 ch 17, | abusefluff or not it was still so cute! |
| beurre 2008-04-27 ch 17, | abuseI absolutely loved that chapter. Loved it. It was so happy and great. I really enjoyed the line “Admit it, Judey. I had you at 'Oh, ** I dropped my books' didn't I?” I loved it. I actually laughed out loud. I cant wait for more. ps I can picture jude biting his lip...I'd like to bite his lip... |