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| nleslie 2008-09-22 ch 4,  | abuseHappy hundredth review! I really like this... You're definitely one of my favorite AtU writers. ^^ |
| lege et lacrima 2008-09-13 ch 18, | abuseOh my gawd. This is brilliant. It really makes me happy. Is that a bad thing? Anyway, can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work. :D |
| nleslie 2008-08-20 ch 1, | abuseOoh, just what I need, more slash. LOL! I kid of course. I'm totally excited about this! Can't wait to see what happens! |
| mypersonalsun 2008-07-07 ch 16, | abuseI've just read this entire thing at once. Did anyone ever tell you that you're brilliant? I'm sure they have..I'm just checking. JUDE/MAX IS MY OBSESSION and you are fulfilling my slashy boylove goodness perfectly! My favorite bit was Jojo walking in...although I spent most of that thinking, "What I wouldn't give to walk in on that." I'm not very good at reviews but let it be known that you are insanely genius. Yes, I noticed the move towards the 70s at the end. I think that was done on purpose, showing that life moves on... |
| InvaderLii 2008-05-17 ch 18, | abuseAW! Cute as always ny friend! This made my very depressing day better. Thank you! *hugs* |
| darksmile23 2008-05-15 ch 11, anon. | abusesniff sniff, aww poor luce |
| darksmile23 2008-05-15 ch 5, anon. | abuseo intense |
| YaneDirnt20 2008-05-13 ch 18, | abuseAww..I thought it was a cute chapter...I actually thought that Michelle might have pimp slapped Max, but obviously that didn't happen...and yeah, you're not the only one who thought that. |
| TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 2008-05-13 ch 18, | abuseGah. The conflicting emotions in my head are killing me. Max and Jude should have their love, but at the same time I feel horrible for Michelle and Lucy. Particularly Michelle, because she didn't see it coming. The confrontations were written well, luv! Don't be so ** yourself. There was enough dramatic tension to make it realistic, but not too much to make it eye-roll worthy. Nice work, update! |
| DarkPhoenix1987 2008-05-13 ch 18, | abusei dont think they said "kick me to the curb" in the 1970s but i still love it lol i think this chapter was very good, very sweet ending to it. |
| Dubious.Mischief.Maker 2008-04-29 ch 17, | abuseaw! |
| Dubious.Mischief.Maker 2008-04-29 ch 16, | abuseAH! Smooth move, Jojo. you owe me $50, too. :D well, if you're going to write any smut, you should put a warning up at the top or rate the story appropriatley. If there are any scenes like that, it should be an M. But it was still a great chapter. :D |
| Dubious.Mischief.Maker 2008-04-29 ch 15, | abuse! YAY! FINALLY! Aww, Max is such a cutie when he's shy. :D too bad Judie stole him. ^_^ haha. I love the way you portray the characters. Prudence is dead on. |
| Dubious.Mischief.Maker 2008-04-29 ch 13, | abuseI almost cried when Jude started to cry. That was so sad! and I've been very bad with reading updates lately... ^_^;; It was a good chapter though. |
| YaneDirnt20 2008-04-28 ch 17, | abuseAww..this chappy was soo cute...It's okay that you haven't wrote in a while...everyone has their breaks...I mean, I've been on a brake for at least a year...hehehe...anyways...great chappy and I can't wait to read what happens with the exes...! |