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| werewolf5 2008-08-19 ch 1, | abusei want more. |
| MLS 2008-08-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's a cute idea, and a very cute writing style. keep it up! |
| CraZyPshyChoLadY 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuseWhat a cute story! Please continue. Inkyhands13 |
| fang321 2008-07-12 ch 1, | abusei love it keep going! have more up soon! |
| oliveoil889 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseGood jo. Please update soon. |
| darkangelvampire 2008-04-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg! so cute ^.^ I just luv reading these little tidbits from his childhood. dish ish adorable ^.^ |
| oirishgoddess 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseAH! that is gorgeous! so well written, and such a sweet and unique idea, too. little alex is so CUTE! i liked seeing him/john from helens POV, because we honestly dont know that much about her... liked how you hinted at alex having a good physical performance ie. being able to land and jump off things and not hurt himself. nice clues, really layers up the story :) im glad you wrote them as a true happy family-they really seem like they love and like spending time with each other. which came across brilliantly in your writing. see...i read another of your fics! lol. i promise i will get round to reading the other one as wel...lets just see if i can stay up long enough! *yawn* i am sehr tired. i really hope you continue this! id love to read on further, though i realise it has a lower priority. also, we have something in common: we both have gandhi quotes on our profiles!! WOH he rocks, yes?! well done :) |
| Munu 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseIt cute. u should make another chapter. their arnt many happy fan fics of alex rider. it would be nice for a change. :) |
| MarauderetteLily 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abusevery good and sweet! loved how you had the 4yr olds emotions put out. also like when he says that hes making all of it. again very nice ! |
| Taylor5795 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseare you gonna write more cuz i love it so far! are gonna kill Alex's parents or let them live? i think it would be really cool and new if they got to live in this! :D |
| hails 2008-03-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww, so cute! And Helen is such a mother, protective and all! But I thought Helen and John died when Alex was one...I may be mistaken though XD I've never had a great memory for dates and the like! The last paragraph said a lot about Helen and her husbands family's line of work! It's well thought out!! Hope to see another update some time!! |
| ninjamonkeyts3 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseaw bless him. the cuteness! please write more! |
| SheWeapon1 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseAw i love it, its so cute! This story is a very good idea and i can't wait to read more, imagining Alex at 4yrs old is so cute. :P Anyway i love it and can't wait to read more so keep up the great work and please update again as soon as you get the chance what with the other stories you have. :P Anyway till next time, bye 4 now! :) |
| liz22463 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseit was good, but i'm just wondering, are you an american? because you used mom quite a lot. “Oh yes, that too. Thanks mom” Wouldn't it be "mum" because Alex is british? |