incredible! i mean... i love it XD
Bella Black.. ohh it sounds so good :D .. perfect actually

"And then there was the question of Jacob’s name itself, scattered across the lined pages with circles drawn around it; because hearts break, but circles don’t, and the sun outlasts a heartbeat any given day,"

I LOVED this line. So beautiful and simple and perfectly J/B. Great work!

i can't think of any word except cute when this story comes to mind. i love your writing style.

I think the word to describe this is 'cute'. Cause it simply is. We all know for a fact that Bella was in denial but since the books are from her POV we never got to see just exactly how in denial she was because as far as she was concern, nothing was going on. So this was really great to read. And the bit about circles and hearts in the end was just perfect. Loved the insight.

That was brilliant. I've just recently read the Twilight series, and I can't tell you how happy I am that my favorite Taang writer also ships the pairing that I decided that I like in this series.

Weird how these things works out, huh?

Keep Writing.

I loved it.
Your writing style is so... I dont know, classy.
Please add another chapter.
Have Jacob find out one day while they're studying.
Make it awsum.

Mmph, if only this happened in the book...cuter than cute. I adore it. Bella Black indeed. XD

Certainly one of the best Jacob x Bella stories I've ever read. Characterization was spot-on, plot adorable, and ending cute. Great, great job. ^^

Aw, that's so cute! I can totally see that happening, too. Very nicely done and in character, which can be hard with the pairing. Absolutely lovely. I'd love to see this continued! (But it's good as is, too.)

FreeDaChickens

Bella is so in denial...haha
The first time I read Eclipse I felt like the whole bella-realizing-she-loves-jake-as-more-then-a-friend thing came out of nowhere... but then I became a Jake/werewolf lover. And I went back through the books, and I saw lots of evidence that Bella loved Jake that I had missed before. So I like how this has that theme.
Great work. Really well written and snappy. :-)

Oh, so of course I had to be a creeper and check your stuff out... SO GLAD that I did. I love Jacob Black -- used to HATE Edward, but since they cast RPattz he's been growing on me...

For having such a simple setting and theme, your writing is really elegant. Like, super elegant. And I didn't see one error, so I'm ashamed of myself now, because I just throw stories out there on the internet usually without perusal, while this was absolutely perfect and polished... you captured Bella's character wonderfully, and I loved the little descriptions -- like their fingers "joining like puzzle pieces". And, of course, Angela is rad like always. She better get more love in the fourth book.

>w< So cute. I loved the line about the circles as apposed to hearts. Just adorable.

*Nudge here*
I don't ship Jacob/Bella, but I adore this piece. Very sweet, very fluffy, and totally in character.

That is so adorable! I absolutely love the ending too "because hearts break, but circles don’t, and the sun outlasts a heartbeat any given day, anyway..." That is the sweetest thing I've ever read; not to mention that it is something that I could easily see Bella saying.
This was absolutely wonderful.

Ive recently read the Twilight series as well :D And i love Jacob

interesting take on bella/jacob.