Nice work.

An excellent "Buffy" adventure. Should have been an episode. Nice use of the entire ensemble.

It seems crazy to me this hasn't been reviewed yet. Anyway...

An excellent story. A strong, believable plot, fitting perfectly with the the show and characters at that time, that is well paced right to the end. The interaction between Angel, Xander and Cordelia I thought was particularly good. I also admire your ability to handle such a large cast of characters, giving each something to say when appropriate, and without making them sound all the same.