 Gershwhen 2009-07-25 . chapter 1Oh, this was adorable! I really liked reading this - and your Holmes was so in character. Thank you for the smile. |
 Verity Kindle 2008-07-14 . chapter 1re-reading...aw. XD |
 Obi's Second Cousin 2008-06-14 . chapter 1*rotfl* Oh, I like this so much better than the book! Wonderful! |
 Miss Raella Morgan 2008-05-11 . chapter 1Cute! Good job with writing in character. |
 T 2008-03-25 . chapter 1 Despite being thoroughly non-cannon, I really really like! "For every equal and opposite reaction" - such a perfect set up. And, that Watson was there (I thought that Mrs Hudson would come in, but him! - wonderful!). Her reaction is perfect, really - not having recieved one before, nor ever expecting it of him, her mind would blank; his strain is great, too. Brilliant set up and execution. I'm off to cheer in the garden! Keep writing - as I've said before, your stuff is lovely. :D T |
 Requiem for a Sunburst 2008-03-20 . chapter 1Thank you for this story! It's wonderful to read more of your work. I really enjoyed the language you used--it seems that I'm always obsessing over syntax and word choice, but that's because I've been studying poetry in class for over two months. Anyway--you made the OOC/OOP very believable, mostly because you kept the essence of the characters the same. This would have been over the top if you hadn't kept Holmes dry and ironic. take care- Req |
 BlackMailer 2008-03-17 . chapter 1Hi holly! Glad to see you're writing again, and spectacularly at that. I've been craving for some RH fluff for forever, and this one shot is perfect!
It wasn't OOC; to be honest, I think you've captured the essence of the books very well. I bow to thee. *bows*
Please continue writing! I miss all your fanfics. :)
-Your friendly neighborhood BlackMailer |
 Sacha T. 2008-03-16 . chapter 1 Hehe.. Very good I really enjoy that. |
 -xKuroHinotex- 2008-03-12 . chapter 1Heyy this was good! I loved the cuteness! =]
It reminded me kinda of an anime, strangely enough. o_o Russell and Holmes in anime form!! haha but no, it was very good, I loved it!
Nice to see Holmes contradicting his original personality and becoming more emotional =]
Adorable!
-KuroHinote |
 The Little Cog Girl 2008-03-07 . chapter 1Mrs. King never did specifie (sorry I can't spell well...) how Watson and Mrs. Hutson found out about the engagment and Holmes is famous for his jokes. So who's to say this isn't some elabret gag? |