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Faithful Cherry Blossom
2009-11-29 . chapter 5
Omg, this is an ABOSULTELY AWESOME story! I can't believe Sasuke is such a jackass though! Poor Naruto... I hope you will update soon! =)

faith ^_^
Not Yet Knowing
2009-11-28 . chapter 5
Dude! HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPPIE...I WONDER HOW GAARA AND SASUKE WITH REACT CTO THE NEWS..GAARA MIGHT WANT TO KILL SASUKE AND SASUKE IS SUCH A PRICK HE MIGHT JUST STARE ALL BLANKLY UNTIL HE GETS IT...SAI IS SO NICE IN THIS FIC...HIS AWESOMENESS IS FINALLY SHOWN..HEH..
HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT UPDATE OR I'LL DIE A REGRETFULLY DEATH THINKING OF WAT I WANTED TO KNOW NEXT...
Child of the Kyuubi
2009-11-18 . chapter 5
Intanse.
But i've been enjoying the reading a lot.
And about the pool in ur profile, i think Sasuke should know, but maybe it's not that necessery for Naruto to tell him.
Sasuke is a smartass, isn't he?
I think he will find out by himself one day :-)
I am waiting for another chapter.
Rikado
2009-11-16 . chapter 5
I had a nice long review all typed out and then BAM! The power went out. So I guess you can have the short version this time.

I hardly ever read mpreg, but out of the those that I have read, this is, hands down, the best one I have ever read or probably ever will.

I love how the emotions are so realistic. When you wrote the words together, I think it even added to the scene. Like 'bewildermentconfusionsurprise.'

I'm definitely going to come back to reread this again some time soon.

That being said, please continue. :)
MirrorWakes
2009-11-14 . chapter 5
*sobs in gratitude* You have given the world af fandom something I never thought possible: a realistic, really, really real Mpreg. Thank you so so very much! Please update because I'm desperately awaiting your amazing words of amazingness!
Sgofyyah13
2009-11-08 . chapter 5
please update i can't wait for more.
AmberosiaKristofferson
2009-11-06 . chapter 5
Okay... How to put this... I'm a freaking lazy bum who has no room to talk because I really really need to update Memories... but OMG! please update... I'm seriously sitting here silently rooting for this story and am anxious to read more.
Crystal
2009-11-04 . chapter 5
GUD STORY LINE U SHOULD FINISH IT. ITS REALLY GUD JUST A FEW MISTAKES.
Moxxi
2009-11-02 . chapter 5
Argh. This is so interesting!

I hopehopehope to see more chapters in the future!
Good work!
Muffinsan
2009-10-25 . chapter 5
I really LOVE you for writing this story! <3

I just love how perfect Naruto freaks out over the fact that he's going to have a baby and it is just so real how he thinks about how having a baby and how much he'll be affected by it and god it is just so freaking amazing hwo human you make him and how much Sai is being such a good friend and man he should have been the father instead except not really because I can see so much problems with that too!

Gah, I can't really express how much I love this story without sounding like a bigger nerd than I already am! Heh, sorry for the run on sentences and the not making much sense too! Still I just wanted to let you know that I really find your story effin enthralling!
inumoon3
2009-10-12 . chapter 3
Please update soon!
I want to so know what happens next!
milkchocolatehot64
2009-10-10 . chapter 5
AWESOME! AND SO SAD! PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHS! CAN'T WAIT!
counter-intuitive
2009-10-03 . chapter 5
Sasuke-teme doesn't deserve to know his kid. I think Naruto will be an awesome single mum... err I mean... dad.
chu chu banato!
2009-09-29 . chapter 5
rarw i dont even no wat 2 say! this is amazing! i havent been able 2 get on the comp. 4 days AND im sick, so u just made my day! it's kinda hard 2 find good stories like this *sigh* nyway, great job and PLZ UPDATE ASAP!
emonaru
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
Ohmygod! I love this story! Must read more! MOAR I say!

Seriously what a nice story I can see the angst just oozing out of it!
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