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Reviews For: There is a Light That Never Goes Out

Zeria
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abuseWow, very powerful beginning. I'm really hooked now. All the descriptions of Chris and Wyatt's relationships with their parents and each other was done just wonderfully. It also fits so well with the story already told by the canon.

And the end? Great stuff. The word choice was perfectly morbid and dark and almost...hopeless. You've made it completely impossible for me to wait too long to know what happens next ;)

Great job,
-z-
jenny
2008-03-07
ch 1, anon.
abusedefinitly liked it, please continue
guardian music angel
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseplz update! this is so good!
cdfe88
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant. Very well written. A fine piece of literary work.
wild wolf free17
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseAwesome.
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