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| Zeria 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, very powerful beginning. I'm really hooked now. All the descriptions of Chris and Wyatt's relationships with their parents and each other was done just wonderfully. It also fits so well with the story already told by the canon. And the end? Great stuff. The word choice was perfectly morbid and dark and almost...hopeless. You've made it completely impossible for me to wait too long to know what happens next ;) Great job, -z- |
| jenny 2008-03-07 ch 1, anon. | abusedefinitly liked it, please continue |
| guardian music angel 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseplz update! this is so good! |
| cdfe88 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant. Very well written. A fine piece of literary work. |
| wild wolf free17 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. |