Its a great story and I woulkd like to read a sequel but i think your prioritys have changed. I´m really sad about that.

I have to say that was an awesome story, got to love Jameron!

You did a great job portraying both characters, and I like how both John and Cameron were slowly finding out what they felt for each other and how much they meant to each other.

I would love to see a sequel for this, but as its been more than a year and there has been no sequel so far I am assuming this is it... but you did a great job and I would like to give you props for that.

Damn. I know I've said it before, but that was good!

would def like to see a continuation of this story bro! quite good

Excellent story!

That was AWESOME! I hope you write a sequle!

Dirt Rider

loved it. I'm really impressed how you balanced Cameron's personality - gaining humanity but not human. That's where most people are 'messing up' in this world of TSCC fanfiction. ^^ I definitely enjoyed this. Thanks for writing!

Hey, I love this story (a lot) and I love your unique ideas about John and Cameron. I doubt that the show will go in your direction, though. The theme of the show seems to revolve around machines becoming human, rather than both humans and machines evolvoing into a halfway point. I really love the show- it has fewer black and white views than most TV shows of the kind, but it still clings to the extremes of 'good' and 'evil'. I really like how you portray Skynet as more than just a killing machine, and I like how you portray John and Cameron as blends of human and machine. I'll definately read more of your stories! :)

awesome story!!:D one of the best Cam/Jon fics I've read, for that pair is so cute.

This is probably the best TSCC fic I've read so far. I caught myself agreeing with every point in your characterization, especially when it came to Cameron. There are lots of fanfiction portraying her too - like you said - humanized, something that sounds off more often than not. At best, people write her as a sort of futuristic Pinocchio, longing to be human. Your Cameron sounded just about right: a cyborg capable of learning and evolving emotionally as well, becoming more human with time is a consequence, but she can never forget completely her robotic essence. The streams of consciousness are extremely accurate.

Your John is also outstanding. He has teenage dilemmas, yes, but he can't be only an angsty, whining teen. That's a luxury for "normal" kids. The way you portray his emotional growth throughout the story is just fascinating and very in-character.

I just thought Sarah seemed to accept things all too well... It must be appalling to her, to say the least, seeing her son fall for a machine, after witnessing all the destruction terminators are capable of and after going through so much to save John from terminators. I don't thing she'd get along with their relationship so easily, simply pretending it wasn't there. Maybe you could explore her feelings a bit more in another fic? :)

Finally, I loved the reasons you found to make this pairing work: the way they complement each other, how mutual understanding is a key in this man x machine war - even to prove that the differences between them aren't really that clear and that they can work together in other circumstances. This isn't a fic that molds its plot to the pairing: the pairing simply happens because its vital to the story, to the message it delivers. Congratulations on the great job! Hope to hear from you soon :)

Love It One Of The Best

Keep up the good work! You should definitely write a sequel to this thing. It's great! Probably the same kind of plot, with a minor storyline of how John is trying to beat the Turk, culminating in him beating the Turk by form of basic human action or emotion like fear or lying. Anyway, keep it up!

I loved this fic, you've got John and Cameron down perfectly in my opinion, and I like how you portrayed Cameron's development and both hers and Johns feelings for each other. I'd love it if you wrote a sequel to this fic, perhaps shortly before or just after judgment day, and how their relationship copes in the midst of the war. You are a very talented writer and I've enjoyed several of your other TSCC works. Here's hoping you do write a sequel one day (hopefully soon).

King Steve

I really, REALLY like the way you took the time out to develop Cameron and the relationship between the two. No part of it felt rushed; everything flowed just right. Bravo :)

i really enjoyed this story. you captured their personalties really well, and it was beutifully written. good job!!