I love that gohan and videl dont have sex from the start like most fanfics. I also love that vegeta has an interest in gohans mating prosses

great story you should continue.

It's too bad that you stopped writing this fic but anyways. I still loved the 24 chapters that you have written and the detail and care you took with the history and especially Gohan's character.

Keep on doing your best and best wishes for your life ;-)

Mariko

Great Story you should continue writting it.

Um, are you planning on continuing this story? Please say you are, because this is one of my favorite stories on the site. It's just you haven't updated in almost two years, nor have you changed the story's status, so I'm understandably a tad worried about its future.

Please Get Back To Me,

AvaMagic88

This is a fantastic story and quite original which is rare anymore. I really hope you find the time to continue it.

are you ever going to finish? please tell me by emailing me at

You seriously need to continue this story,it is fantastic

This was one of the best dragon ball fanfictions i have read i hope you continue it.

this story is kickass. i hope you decide to continue it.

love it, please update soon eveb though its been a long time since you last updated. This is by far my favorite after cell story that I have read. :)

this is a realy good story

the ups the down the powerful gohan with out making it seem like everyone else is really weak or making gohan depressed.

i am sad to see you have not updated in a while i hope its just writers block and you havent given up on the story.

well keep up the good work

Naruto Cullen

P.S. if you read Naruto fics check mine out, MASK AND DECEIT

and let me know what yoiu think of what i hve down thus far.

PLEEEAAASSSSEEEEEE UPDATE! I love this story! It's sooo awesome!

I for one thing agree with you 100%. I also believe that instead of Hurcule Satan being the way he usually is, I think He should have been defeated by the one known as Gohan. That way Chichi would have been much more happier with him. Moreso thenever. Otherwise this chapter was pretty good. Even though that movie was just so low that it was actually a lie.

This chapter was the best one yet! Keep up the good work.