THis almost brought tears to my eyes. :)

I like the idea. It's kind of sad, of course.
Lina is spot on.

Well, you took my heart out and poured acid on it and tore it into five thousand point three pieces and threw them to the floor and stomped on them, put them back together, and repeated. Then you flushed them down the toilet. To the sewer. With the rats. With rabies.
This story was totally awsome, I will not lie. But then it was all heart-wrenching and now I feel all funny in my stomach... I read Immortal Rain {a manga by Kaori Ozaki} so immortality and all the hell of it is explained, so I'm really sensitive to that... But if other people who read this are like me, then it was a really touching and heart-warming story. I almost wanted to cry when you mentioned Amelia died!

THIS WAS GOOD. REALLY, REALLY, GOOD. ^^

It's a good story. A nice take on Zel's relationship with everyone when they're older.

*sniffle* Ouch, my heart. This was beautiful. (I love Lina/Zel friendship fics).

At first, I was going to pout because Gourry's on his deathbed, but this fic is too good to complain about that minor detail!

Well done! Nice characterizations of Feisty!Old!Lina and Grouchy!Immortal!Zel.

Aw... so sad and bittersweet.

Nice! :) Interesting rendition of old Lina.

Aw, such a bittersweet fic... but so good all the same!

That was pretty sad... But at least Lina did her best to cheer Zel up! Hey, did you hear that the 4th season of Slayers is finally being made? Thought I'd spread the word... and it's not a rumor this time, surprise surprise!

Aw... sweet! I loved it. Nice job chica.