I LOVE it! I really like Lucas too.

Aw... that was the cutest Lucas-based story I've ever read. You really captured his character and made him a sympathy character... I love this!
Awesome job :D

This is so cute. You really feel sorry for Lucas (as I'm sure you were going for XD) while he's trying so hard to not step on any toes... poor Lucas! I like the protective Ness helping Lucas out. Good job!

A fellow Lucas fan... so nice...
This is so cute. And yes, Lucas has awesome hair. :'D
And I chuckled at Snake having his name tag on his box.

This is the most adorable story I've ever read! I love Lucas, he's my second favorite character in Brawl(because Ness will always be my main). And, noo, the ending wasn't tacky. :) I thought it was cute. Keep it up! *favs*

Oh my.
I love this story so so much. Lucas is my favorite character in SSB, and I thought this was one of the best stories i've ever read about Lucas. :D
Great job. 5 star.

Very nice.

Sorry it's taken so long to review. I love Lucas here, he sounds like a real nice kid. Those other guys were just mean to him - thank goodness Ness was there!

Tacky or not, the ending still rocked. This fanfiction alone has raised the quality of this section. For that, I thank you.

Aww,how touching!Lucas and Ness make a great team.

SSB stories have to be the hardest ones to write. Odds are, people don't play the ALL games and hardly know the characters, yanno?

This is only the second fanfic I've read, but I did really like it. Lucas is so cute, evfen though I've never played... those one games. o_o; Dunno how many of the games you've played, but you paid attention to some the extra stuff quite well.

I loved how you talked about how senselessly random the game's cast is in the first half. Yay, Yoshi likes the talking box. Flippin' adorable. x3

Really nice! You made this fanfic exceptionally enjoyable, and it was sweet to see Lucas and Ness warm up to each other. The characters were in character to the max; it seems you have a natural talent for that sort of endeavor. :]

Only prob is, I'm not sure each and every smasher would get so **... xD; But I guess everyone woke up on the wrong side of the bed that day.

This was a good story. My favorite characters in Brawl are Lucas and Pokemon Trainer a.k.a. Red. I would like to see more stories with these two taking a major part. Not you in particular because you said you wouldn't do anymore Brawl stories, but just in general.

This was a wonderful story with very lovely moments. Lucas' timid personality made every scene he was involved in sweet. Kirby writing "everything" for favourite food got me laughing. I also found Yoshi and his fascination with the cardboard box cute. I was a little shocked at the brawler's rowdyness and hostility toward each other, then toward Lucas. It was so touching how Ness stood up for Lucas. I enjoyed reading this very much. Good job.

Aww! I loved it. Your Lucas is a cutie! (And he's not OOC).

I'll be waiting for the next update.

Holy crap on Toad, you actually posted in the Smash section? WOW. All I gotta say is that this was some definite good stuff, and it's great to see you add some originality to here. While I can't say anything else because I have the attention span of a flea, all I gotta say was hat this was good, and, um, er...

(crickets)

I'll just leave you with this review...later! I guess...

(coughs)

SQUADILAH! WE'RE OFF!! (rushes off)