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andriabow
2008-07-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseI loved it. These two fandoms together are two of my favorites.
Yours was so well written and I'd love more of this. Do you have plans for more of these two fandoms? I would love to read more.
Thank you.
Ranger24
2008-07-01
ch 8,
abuseNice
archiev
2008-04-06
ch 8,
abuseJust found and read this whole story. Excellent work!
lazybones
2008-04-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseAn great start to what appears to a well written and planned out story. Although I'm trying to work out why Sam would have a problem with a female superior been called "sir" as a significant number of organisations use "sir" regardless of gender.

Oh well 1 chapter down 7 to go, I hoe there all as good as this one.
Admiral Agathon
2008-04-01
ch 8,
abusewell that was an interesting story. over all it was quite good. will you be doing a sequel that might perhaps address why there is a conection between the lords of Kobol and the Greek and Roman Pantheon? great story keep up the good work.
TheHamsterInMyMind
2008-03-29
ch 8,
abuseLOL! This was astoundingly great!
skywiseskychan
2008-03-26
ch 8,
abuseI have to say that I feel quite lucky. In two days, two stories added to the meeting their neighbors list have turneed out to be quite excelent. This even more than the other I just read. You have a real tallent for drawing in a reader and making the charachters engaging. I thought for a minute you were completely ignoring continuity when you jumped to pegasus but I'm glad I was a bit mislead rather than having an otherwise fine story sabotaged. I will be keeping up with your other stories and anything else you write eagerly from this point forth.
Lady Henrietta
2008-03-25
ch 8,
abuseThis was fantastic! It had it's serious moments, but also a great deal of humor. It was great when Thor accidentally beamed Laura up, and having her and Kara meet Ronan and the whole thing was such a fun read. I like that they built cabins in the end. Nice job :D.
WBH21C
2008-03-24
ch 7,
abuseVery well done!
lullabymoon
2008-03-24
ch 8,
abuseI love this! I may have already said this but you've got all the characters spot on, especially Jack and his sense of humour. I was LOL at points with his remarks. I totally wasn't expecting the jump forward but it was well handled and we did get to see what happened so I was quite happy. It was a nice way, however of getting round the boring setting up alliance part of the fic that could possibly have taken a while. Anyway, once again, I loves.
Alec Star
2008-03-23
ch 8,
abuseNice, I really enjoyed it though I have to admit that at times I felt like I was reading two good stories that didn't necessarily belong together... not to mention that I was left wondering what happened to Sam (I am assuming that you meant Sam when, in chapter 4, you wrote 'Kara loved her husband, and she loved Lee...' but after Kara and Laura came back he wasn't even mentioned). I know I'm nitpicking here, as a whole I enjoyed the experience, I was just a little thrown by the sudden change in plot-line... but then again maybe that is just me.
airam4u
2008-03-23
ch 8, anon.
abuseA very nice story. Good job!
Calico Star
2008-03-22
ch 7,
abuseLovely story. Thank you.
Knight of Avalon
2008-03-22
ch 6,
abuseWhat happened to them? And how the heck did Roslin get 10 years younger?

Please post the next chapter soon!
airam4u
2008-03-22
ch 6, anon.
abuseI like everyone else I assume did not see that one coming! When I started reading this chapter I was thinking 'Did I miss a chapter?' 'Is this the the same story?'
Well played! Can't wait to find out what's happened in the intervening years!
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