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Forts
2008-04-07 . chapter 3
Crap I almost exited this page without reviewing!

Loved it. :D Alot. Can't wait for more.
Lady Dragon010
2008-04-06 . chapter 3
O.K. I am ladydragons littel sister, i am 13, i wached a south park episod by acadint, I'v loved it ever sense, my fav. caricter is Kenny, and continue.P.S. I never say bad words.
ktkitty4
2008-03-21 . chapter 3
actually stan prayed in a cartin ep. and why won't Kenny come back this time? why is it diffrent?
Loca Bambina
2008-03-18 . chapter 3
So sad. :(
You captured the boys' emotions really well, especially Stan's (he was the one I was looking for, since he has so much strong emotion in "Kenny Dies"). What I noticed, though, was that I could feel each character's emotion the most not when they were narrating, but when another character was observing them. (Kyle's observation of Stan, for instance, as well as Cartman's observation of Kyle and Stan).
Sorry if that made no sense... I thought this was a great chapter and I can't wait for number 4.
kookygurl82
2008-03-10 . chapter 2
T_T NOO! Kenny can't have died..Permanently! NOO! Damn! Ihope you have a good ending to this:(
ktkitty4
2008-03-10 . chapter 2
omg!! wots goin ta happen? Sorry i've been readin an' writing alot of Sweeney Todd fics
Loca Bambina
2008-03-10 . chapter 2
Wow, this is really good! (And I'm not just saying that because of all the unbelievably awesome things you've said about my stories...) :)
The dialogue is great and totally realistic without getting boring. I like how you referenced "Kenny Dies" (saddest episode EVER!) and Kyle and Jimmy's lines about Timmy's speech were good.
I liked the Hitchhiker reference too. This is completely off-topic, but if you Google "answer to life, the universe, and everything", Google Calculator gives you the answer... (sorry if no one else but me finds that totally hilarious)
And btw... THANK YOU SO MUCH! :D
H.C.G
2008-03-10 . chapter 2
Aw! Sad chapter. lol leave it to Token carrying around a mini tv and yay for hitchhiker reference! 42 is definitely the answer! Can't wait to see more.
ktkitty4
2008-03-08 . chapter 1
hahaha cool! :)
kookygurl82
2008-03-07 . chapter 1
LOLZ. Its O.K,You didn't bore me. Not at all. I actually find it entertaining^_^
OH NOEZ0.0
KENNY! I wonder whats gonna happen? Oh well,We'll just have to see what happens!
PLEASE CONTINUE OR MAY I BE FORCED TO EAT YOUR BRAINS..ALIVE!1!!1! MWUHAHAHAHAHA!1!1!
Loca Bambina
2008-03-07 . chapter 1
Ooh, this is good. Everyone is very IC, and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
September In The Rain
2008-03-07 . chapter 1
Pretty Good. I'll be looking out for the next chapter
Sweet Possum
2008-03-07 . chapter 1
aww, that was cute. Cartman and Kenny are cute. lol. can't wait to see the next chapter!
H.C.G
2008-03-07 . chapter 1
I liked it, you did quite well for your very first story. Can't wait to see the next chapter
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