 Forts 2008-04-07 . chapter 3Crap I almost exited this page without reviewing!
Loved it. :D Alot. Can't wait for more. |
 Lady Dragon010 2008-04-06 . chapter 3O.K. I am ladydragons littel sister, i am 13, i wached a south park episod by acadint, I'v loved it ever sense, my fav. caricter is Kenny, and continue.P.S. I never say bad words. |
 ktkitty4 2008-03-21 . chapter 3actually stan prayed in a cartin ep. and why won't Kenny come back this time? why is it diffrent? |
 Loca Bambina 2008-03-18 . chapter 3So sad. :(
You captured the boys' emotions really well, especially Stan's (he was the one I was looking for, since he has so much strong emotion in "Kenny Dies"). What I noticed, though, was that I could feel each character's emotion the most not when they were narrating, but when another character was observing them. (Kyle's observation of Stan, for instance, as well as Cartman's observation of Kyle and Stan).
Sorry if that made no sense... I thought this was a great chapter and I can't wait for number 4. |
 kookygurl82 2008-03-10 . chapter 2T_T NOO! Kenny can't have died..Permanently! NOO! Damn! Ihope you have a good ending to this:( |
 ktkitty4 2008-03-10 . chapter 2omg!! wots goin ta happen? Sorry i've been readin an' writing alot of Sweeney Todd fics |
 Loca Bambina 2008-03-10 . chapter 2Wow, this is really good! (And I'm not just saying that because of all the unbelievably awesome things you've said about my stories...) :)
The dialogue is great and totally realistic without getting boring. I like how you referenced "Kenny Dies" (saddest episode EVER!) and Kyle and Jimmy's lines about Timmy's speech were good.
I liked the Hitchhiker reference too. This is completely off-topic, but if you Google "answer to life, the universe, and everything", Google Calculator gives you the answer... (sorry if no one else but me finds that totally hilarious)
And btw... THANK YOU SO MUCH! :D |
 H.C.G 2008-03-10 . chapter 2Aw! Sad chapter. lol leave it to Token carrying around a mini tv and yay for hitchhiker reference! 42 is definitely the answer! Can't wait to see more. |
 ktkitty4 2008-03-08 . chapter 1hahaha cool! :) |
 kookygurl82 2008-03-07 . chapter 1LOLZ. Its O.K,You didn't bore me. Not at all. I actually find it entertaining^_^
OH NOEZ0.0
KENNY! I wonder whats gonna happen? Oh well,We'll just have to see what happens!
PLEASE CONTINUE OR MAY I BE FORCED TO EAT YOUR BRAINS..ALIVE!1!!1! MWUHAHAHAHAHA!1!1! |
 Loca Bambina 2008-03-07 . chapter 1Ooh, this is good. Everyone is very IC, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. |
 September In The Rain 2008-03-07 . chapter 1Pretty Good. I'll be looking out for the next chapter |
 Sweet Possum 2008-03-07 . chapter 1aww, that was cute. Cartman and Kenny are cute. lol. can't wait to see the next chapter! |
 H.C.G 2008-03-07 . chapter 1I liked it, you did quite well for your very first story. Can't wait to see the next chapter |