FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| ikkin9okkin 2008-05-31 ch 3,  | abusesweet... upadate soon |
| ReadingRed 2008-05-06 ch 3, | abuseumm it's a good story and all but I think it might be better if you found a beta to look over your story and correct some mistakes. |
| Connor846 2008-05-05 ch 3, | abuseCute interaction between the partners :-) I like the direction you are going with the story, but I have one suggestion. As others have commented it does seem that English is not your first language. I suggest that you ask someone to be a beta reader who would know more about the terminology and sentence structure of the English language. You have a good, well thought out plot unfolding. It just needs a tiny little bit of polishing :-) |
| BlueTigress 2008-05-05 ch 3, | abuseGreat story so far!! I really love the story of your fanfic!! I guess english isn't your first language, it also isn't mine!! :D But if somebody would beta read it, it would be easier to read and I would love it even more!! Can't wait for more!! :D |
| Hazmatt 2008-05-04 ch 3, | abuseI look forward to reading more! |
| Hazmatt 2008-05-04 ch 2, | abuseI enjoyed it! |
| Hazmatt 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseInteresting chapter! I liked it! |
| brenneth 2008-03-19 ch 2, | abuseoh my god¡¡ whe say that??¡¡ hahaha that will be so interesting¡¡ i want to know what happen¡¡ |
| Lyra91 2008-03-10 ch 2, | abusegood chapter plz update soon nice job |
| kaytieorndorff 2008-03-10 ch 2, | abusePlease con't please con't. I love this story so far. It sounds like it could go a long way. i would love to read more. This is a really good story. |
| brenneth 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abusehey i loke the description that you use in the begin and sounds like a good storie exept for parker will be there haha can they just leave him with ange and jack¡ hahaha i like it i would like to read it dont late in up the chapters |
| Acerbond 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseHi - or should I say Salut! Great work for your first published (here at least) fic in English. The structure and word order was a bit off but you'll get better with practice. Interesting storyline though - I think it could develop into a really engaging tale, most of the shippers here love BB and what better than to throw Parker into the mix! Keep it up. AB |