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| harryedwardgirl93 2008-08-05 ch 1,  | abuseI loved it, expecially the ending. Jasper is one of my favorite Cullens and I think you did him justice. |
| MoonlightShadowOfADarkDream 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseIt was great! I really liked it!! |
| NoMoreThanUsual 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was great. You did a fine job of capturing Jasper's voice. I loved it. I look forward to your next story! |
| VioletCullen01 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this story. I love stories with Jasper and this one really captured my attention. Very well written. =] |
| mnov29 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abusehey this is good i like how u r doing bella bonding with each of the cullens its cool and r u going to do this wih each culen? |
| silent smiles 2008-03-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story! You did a awesome job at capturing Jasper :) |
| FangedLeaf 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseYou captured jasper well. My only suggestion would be to give a little bit more information in terms of Jasper's feelings. You described how Bella felt quite nicely though his eyes but you didn't really focus on Jasper's reaction to her words/emotions. Great story! |
| SecretSnow 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseI like it! You have done a veery good job of keeping everyone in characer. And I loved the part about 'Vampires Anonymous'! That was pretty funny! |