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| emommer 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseOh - please tell me you're going to continue this! Please, please!! |
| ssbailey 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abusewhy is it going to end badly? |
| deal4321 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseLoved how Derek wooed her and actually got her to agree to a date. Now he just has to show her that it won't be a disaster and that he really does love her! Can't wait to read more!! |
| nonhalema 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseLove it, just the last sentence confused me a bit: This was going to be another date that ended in a disaster. Somehow it doesn’t fit…other than that: good as usual |
| bahjcb 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abusePlease tell me you are going to show us the date! You can't leave us with Penelope sure the date is going to end in disaster. Besides that, way cute! I like Derek's style. I like how dedicated he is to getting the results he wants. He's wonderful. |
| Harleyzgirl 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseComplete? I don't think so. Need more of this story. Soon, please. |
| GorgeousGummyBear 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abuseaw, i hope it works out for them! |