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Reviews For: Best invitation

emommer
2008-03-31
ch 1,
abuseOh - please tell me you're going to continue this! Please, please!!
ssbailey
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abusewhy is it going to end badly?
deal4321
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseLoved how Derek wooed her and actually got her to agree to a date. Now he just has to show her that it won't be a disaster and that he really does love her! Can't wait to read more!!
nonhalema
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseLove it, just the last sentence confused me a bit: This was going to be another date that ended in a disaster. Somehow it doesn’t fit…other than that: good as usual
bahjcb
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abusePlease tell me you are going to show us the date! You can't leave us with Penelope sure the date is going to end in disaster.

Besides that, way cute! I like Derek's style. I like how dedicated he is to getting the results he wants. He's wonderful.
Harleyzgirl
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abuseComplete? I don't think so. Need more of this story. Soon, please.
GorgeousGummyBear
2008-03-07
ch 1,
abuseaw, i hope it works out for them!
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