DX> oh no!! i liked this story though...

please update soon!

Hey! I love your story! It's totaly awesome! I hope you put up the next chapter soon, yeah!?!

Just-Another-Gaara-Fan-Gurl

Hey, you need to write a new chapter!! I love this story! :) i cant wait to read more! :D

E! Hinata-chan! Hehehehe.

Loved this chapter, by the way.

'Bushes and local shrubbery' are your friends? What about trees? Trees need love too.

Hehehe, kidding, kidding.

Can't wait until the next chapter!

Jeez! What're you talking about? I LOVE your writing!!

It's a really great idea for a story, and I like how they called Melissa 'HoneyBee'. One of my best friends is named Melissa, and she acts just like the character (you?).

Anyway, it's really cute. I bet Melissa-Kitty looks absolutely adorable.

Nicely done. I'm rather confused to when you said you couldn't write. Not good lying *wink*. Anyways, the beginning of your mission just started and your hands are typing away with a flow of thoughts leading to a plot. You are cooking up a plot, no?

Like the other chapter, I enjoyed the humor you brought to it and the events pulled along.

Although I'm not trying to discourage your spelling and whatnot, you need to look closer to when you mistaken 'too' for 'to' and vise-versa. You do have a beta on your right? I hope your rereading your chapters before posting. Trust me, it'll help you along the way. I alway forget to reread mine and have red pen all over my essay papers. Rather embarrassing...

P.S. ”Well that’s ok, so what’s your name anyways, huh huh huh?!” I smile at his perkiness, but I doubt it showed up on my feline features.

”Not sure yet, ask me in a few days ok?” Made me laugh :D

I must say, you amaze me to no end. I LOVE this FIC! My goodness, just a few paragraphs into the first chapter got me laughing. I knew you were going to make this story with a sense of humor but this is something else. Your grammar and spelling improved most definitely.

Congratulations with the new FIC. I'll be waiting for more.

P.S. "Who’s smarter then you" instead of 'then' because that's used to forward, it's 'than' if comparing. And 'Who's' it's the right way of writing so, it's 'whose'. But don't worry to much about it, you did a great job! Aside from that I enjoyed this very much. :D

S.L.

Hey! your writeing dosent suck! its awesome! ^_^ i really liked it! ive been wondering when you were going to update! i just now figured out how to reveiw, so sorry i didnt on the last chapter! update soon ok!