Reviews for Fate's Last Laugh

Reviews For: Fate's Last Laugh

pontiger27 2008-06-25 ch 1,	abuseOMG WHAT AN AWSOME STORY
peaches849 2008-06-04 ch 1,	abusei did love that ep! i just wish that pr wouldnt hint at couples and then they rarely get together! rr! anyway, you should use other eps and build onto this story! i love how you added the ending! it was great!
CathyD 2008-04-04 ch 1,	abuseVery nice, I really enjoyed this one. That's what she gets for lying. LOL I look forward to reading more C/L from you, hopefully. ~Cat~
yellow power 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseReally liked it! I loved this episode and it was really cool the way you adjusted it in your fic. I loved him falling over her and their faecs being inches away. Great job
Freedom909 2008-03-14 ch 1,	abuseI wish this really happened in the show!
zack16 2008-03-11 ch 1, anon.	abusehey dude im wrighting a story exactly like that but its a LaseyxLilyxCamille it will be awsome and i was wondering if you wanna help me?
JuseaPeterson 2008-03-11 ch 1,	abuseThis was good, not one of my favorites. I guess it was that they ending up having the whole kiss thing so soon, for me I just think that Casey and Lily, it would take time. So I did like the fact that it wasn't an 'I love you' kiss. It was an interesting read, and you did a good job.
aznboi85 2008-03-08 ch 1,	abuseI do see some similarities between this and what I wrote, but don't worry; I won't freak out on you. As always, it is nice to see another JF fic, especially another Casey/Lily fic. I'm not sure on the spelling of rin'chi; I always thought it was spelled rinshi. Be careful not to get confused when using 'your' and 'you're'. I loved how you had RJ confront Lily on having feelings for Casey! A little tip when it comes to dialogue; when you have a conversation between only two people, you don't need to put 'he replied' or 'she replied' every time. Maybe the first two times so the readers know who's speaking, but after that, you don't really need to put it when you have line after line of dialogue. I liked your simile: gaped like a fish! I loved how you used the water fight scene! That was one of the top two cutest Casey/Lily scenes of the episode in my opinion. I absolutely adored the part where Lily and Casey were in such close proximity of each other! Haha! I wonder what Theo REALLY pushed himself off of if not the ground. I have a pretty good idea. I kind of expected Theo to react differently to seeing Casey and Lily lying on top of one another, but it's your story, so it's cool. The last line kind of reminded me of a Casey/Lily fic that Overdrive Red wrote. You probably think I'm nitpicky now, but I can assure you I'm not. I really enjoyed reading this, if my adding this to my favorite stories list is any indication. I also liked how you explored what happened after the water fight scene. I don't think it's even possible for me to NOT like a Casey/Lily fic, unless it is horribly written, which yours wasn't. Two thumbs way up!
Dyrne-Faemne 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseCould have been longer, but it's good. More stories about C and L together. This one needs a sequel, now that Casey knows what Lily feels for him.
krissy1748 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseIt was great can't wait for the nexy chapter:D

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