the idea was good, and i liked the characters... but i think hiyori went a little too far to show, well basically everyone. That was just a little too weird for me.
and Urahara's one of my favorite characters, and i cringed every time his name was mentioned in this- so basically i skipped that entire aspect of the story. That was just wrong, to me; reading about a child molester was like the biggest turn off...
Other than that, your writing is good. :)

hilarious:) i LOVE it. keep writing,definitely the best fanfiction i've found in a LONG time. great job.everybody's just so perfectly in character,i can't wait for the next chapter.

Damn!!^^, I liked this story as i through out it all had to cover my bloody nose with my shaking hand for yes i am a fangirling perv i addmit but so what everbody else is too!! there should more shinji/ichgio stuff as your right its hot but everybody seemes to be going for hiyori and him instead!unbelievable!! gah.

LIVE DEMONSTRATION :D

*Snicker quietly* I loved this. I swear there aint enuf Shinji x Ichigo fics out there. *Pouts* Well I'll be off tryin' ta find another good fic.
Ja ne~!

Live demonstration? Hell yeah! -foams at the mouth-

nice sneeky i like it:D
michelle

Heh...poor Ichigo

damn...just a little more...

hehehehe...

YUSH! Ichigo/Shinji action

Damn you Hiyori...

wow...

cool something interesting...

Your last chapter was great! I just didn't know what to say. Nothing offensive was meant. Ya could have asked ya know. Woo! This story was worth the wait! I love it, absolutly love it. Thanks fer the interesting- did I spell this right? -ending!