Cute, but short~~

that is so true. sena is so cute like a puppy. ^_^

yeah! for sena with his puppiness(not sure that's a word)

just wanted to say...this is so funny

but i got something to ask...wouldn't the ex-MVP as a Doberman be shin from Ojo? and not Akaba from Bando?

other than that...i can't wait for what you write next! :]

* laughing so hard at the Agon Poodle ref* i got two poodles and yhea he does have that ' pay attaion to me and olny me!' tude XD

YEY! ^^ So cute~!

I have to say that I definetly pictured a little black lab puppy with Sen's hair when you made the puppy reference, so thank you for bringing a smile to my face ^_^

Really good ficlet here, it all strangely makes sense. ^_^ Really cute, really funny (Agon a poodle? A very snobby and dreadlocked one, but a poodle indeed once I thought about it ^_^) and all together really good.

Loved it!

~Krista Kat

XD I love the reference to Agon as a poodle.

Hiruma is a damned fine Greyhound =D That's a really nice connection.

I found one or two mistakes but otherwise it was error free~

I look forward to the next chapter (if any).