Reviews for Harry Potter And The Elemental's Power
hash4uall 6/2/08 . chapter 14
.. check thick link out.. u fill find the exact bird for Harry.. I think it is perfect.. it is picture perfect man.. and as for lilian.. she can be a gray fox, or the pronghorn or the white - tailed deer or the cougar ( very vicious breed of mountain lioness that can with stand and live under extreme hot conditions..) and coming back to the story.. the story is awesome.. update soon... cant wait.. please pair up the both soon.. at least one of them making advances will be fine .. update..
devx 6/2/08 . chapter 14
love ur story

ice dragon for harry
Zoroz 6/2/08 . chapter 14
awesome chapter...well i'd suggest an ice dragon for harry's animage form but a different fic (cold as ice) is already using that one...um maybe his animage form turns him into a full ice elemental being with exponentially increased abilities :)
Remenis9 6/2/08 . chapter 14
Cool chapter! thank you for killing the blowhard.

For Harry, you could use a wyrm, 2 legged skinny dragon with wings instead of forelegs and known to either use acid or frost instead of fire.

For lillian you can use a firebird (not;not a phoenix), just take your pick from either the egyptian, native american, or chilean version.
Kinnerdamon 6/2/08 . chapter 14
good fic i suggest for harry a swan or seagull and for Lillian i would say a lion or make them be a ice phoenix and a normal phoenix that would be kinda fun
Arkenstone007 6/2/08 . chapter 14
Lillian could be the Phenoix and Harry could be an Ice Dragon. (breathes ice/freezing air instead of fire)
Blueowl 6/2/08 . chapter 14
Wow, really cool stuff here. Really liked how you handled the basilisk and the diary. Can't wait to read how the school will react when they learn it wasn't Harry, but what will happen to Ginny now? She did sort of cast the killing curse. Will the fact she wasn't in control save her? Also curious about who the two/four people who arrived were; I'd assume the professors.

As for animagus forms: for Harry, you could do a water or ice dragon, since a dragon head had appeared when he had used ice against Lillian earlier. For Lillian, you could do a dragon as well, but a fire based one, obviously. Would make things interesting to have two dragons.

Also, if you can't find anyone else to beta and you need a quick one, I offer my services. I currently have time to beta, but I can't promise I will be always be available. I'll let you know promptly if I can't if you take me up on my offer.

Looking forward to more.

Blueowl
insomniac111 6/2/08 . chapter 14
i was thinking that for harry, he could be an augury or whatever and Lillian could be a salamander type thingy, maybe with wings.
Ordan 6/2/08 . chapter 14
Idea's for animagus hmm? For Harry i would suggest going with a penguin. I can see him now, ranting about how useless it is only to find some ingenious use for it. Lillian, I'm not so sure, perhaps an falcon? After all, the Egyptian god of the sun, Ra, had the head of falcon. Might work.
Stygius.Magic 6/2/08 . chapter 14
great chapter, though i did seemed rushed at the end.. congrats, looking forward to the OC-mysteries.

as for animagus - THE NUE'MON ("ICE BIRD")

/bestiary/nue_ #Appearance
Morbious20 6/2/08 . chapter 14
hehe Harry should be a Leviathan the mythical water dragon/serpents , after all manipulating the H20 in the air to enable itself to fly shouldn't be to difficult for a magic water dragon/serpent like the japanese/chinese dragons no wings but still fly . Not sure about Lillian maybe some mythical fire cat or a Nightmare the black horses that look like their on fire and can fly. I thought there was another greek mythical horse that was always on fire but can't remember the name. Well great chapter keep up the great work and post again soon.
I've Got A Secret 6/2/08 . chapter 14
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bleeding hand 6/2/08 . chapter 14
What about an Ice drake

not quite as large as a dragon but with the same skin and main abilities. breathes cold and is more manuverable
uiramatos 6/2/08 . chapter 14
harry should be that ice flying pokemon art-somethingor something similar, like an ice dragon, anyway good chapter...
brendyn 6/2/08 . chapter 14
Harry should be a Lernaean Hydra or a scylla, look it up on wikipedia, the chapter was good but i have no idea for what lillian should be, possibly a senmurv(also called simorgh) there are a few creatures on altreligion./library/graphics/bl_
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