This chapter actually seems to be more of a flashback to what happened after the carnival. I assume them travelling to Kyoto happens a while from this point in the story, and Natsuki's talking about what happened to take them to that point.

Great premise, spectacular execution.

Wow.. such a dark mood in this story.
It's really good, you know! I mean, I could just feel the emotion pouring out from it

I thought Natsuki went to Kyoto with Shizuru in chapter 2 but in this chapter She left Natsuki?..to London? so they're apart now? Anyway,i think ur story's good...yea Natsuki want to learn about real Shizuru more..that's good.Hope that to see the next soon &please explain about this situation..did Shizuru stay in Japan with Natsuki?

what was that last paragraph? don't understand. brain probably not working again.

I could clearly feel all the emotions flowing through that chapter, especially when Natsuki saw Shizuru standing alone after graduation. It was intense. I felt a sharp pang. It was utterly amazing. Please update soon ;)

Cute first chapter. Lookforward to your next update.

Well the real Shizuru isn't that bad, right?
At least it's better than the 'perfect' Fujino Shizuru for all you know. So, lucky Natsuki to be the first to know the real Shizuru and see the true beauty of her significant other. Her case is the same as Natsuki, they will only know each other when they drop their defense and it's no longer there since both are so dear to each other. Well at least Natsuki is getting to know more about Shizuru, something that she should be doing.

I hope I'll see some update from your other story too, yes, it has been a while. Welcome back!

Bleh, everything you write is really good :P
I think Im jealous :D
Great chapter,
Update soon?

hmn..friendship combined with romance, eh? i like that. natsuki gets to know the real shizuru after the fetival. i don't think anyone's done it before, so please continue! i am very much interested in this fic. :)

peace!

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wow wow wow I like it. No I love it, especially the ending part.
oh please update more.
what an interesting trip, the ending part made me craving for more. ;D

btw. I miss your other story too, just want you to know. ;P
I just re-read it 2-3 days ago. ^^v

This was lovely. A very nice perspective of things. =]

*grinning & dancing*
he he I see "jaded088" name. XD

i hope there will be some dialogue in the next chapters...

Nice start. Looking forward to your next update!

Intriguing. Go on.