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Olaf74 2008-08-14 ch 1,	abuseI'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
ElliPW 2008-05-23 ch 6, anon.	abuseOk first off I want to sya you are one of my favorite authors. I like your work and "a sudden burst of speed" is one of my very favorite fics. Now having said that, what the heck happened to this fic? RAR evil Akane knew abour Ryoga!! Oh hi we're the senshi and we happened to be standing here when you fell AND we already know all about you so we don't have to get to know eachother at alL, isn't that great!! Oh hi mom here's all my problems blah blah blah. Blah blah blah you say?? I had no idea!! here let me fix all your problems for you Gr drool slober froth at the mouth We're the outer senshi we keel YOU rar!! Hi I'm sailor moon!! Not only can I cure you but I can give you senshi powers tottaly by acident! I mean WOW. You are SUCH a good author what happened here? Its a like a parade of shortcuts and bad cliches. This is the only fic of yourse that stands out like this the rest are so good! Is this some sort of tounge in cheek parody I am too dence to get?
Lerris 2008-04-13 ch 6,	abuseHere are some notes: At one point you mentioned Usagi had used on Ranma I think the energy equivalent to what Japan uses for a year. If you think about it, that is a bit extreme. Amazing things don't necessarily have to be all about power, but can sometimes be about skill or talent. I have admittedly skimmed a little in some of the battles and such, so maybe I missed it, but I don't think you have fully explained things like: 1) The reason Setsuna wanted him dead in the first place. [If there is a larger reason than just 'his chaos disturbs crystal tokyo' you might want to let readers know early on to avoid the appearance of cliche. 2) Why he had Pluto's sigil 3) The reason Ryoga wasn't purged of the evil the first time moon healed him, or at the very least that Ami didn't pick it up when she scanned him. 4) The reason women are having such extreme reactions to Ranma's presence. Is something else going on, since some of it seems to be pushing plausibility. In the next to the last chapter you were asking for ideas. I would tend to say the best idea is to take all the unanswered questions, and tie it all together. For instance the villain of the story is after something, something to do with time. At a guess due to other plot developments that thing is linked to Ranma. Now what if the artifact, or perhaps a guardian of the artifact is sentient and doing what it can to prevent the artifact from ever being used. Since, perhaps, somehow Ranma is key to using that artifact, the simplest way to protect it is to influence events to get Ranma killed. This same power might even be linked to why Pluto wanted him dead. I'm of course guessing here, but as to ideas, well there is a few. All in all it is a pretty good story. It does need an ending though.
Not Telling at this time 2008-03-02 ch 4, anon.	abuseJust a little anonymous question. The Outers are at this fight between Ranma and Ryouga so why haven't they reacted to "Ranko" at all? I know you have written further than this chapter but after the reaction to even just the posters when they realized it there is a woeful lack of reaction or action as it appears at the end of the 4th installment.
ApocSM 2007-07-08 ch 6,	abuseWOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON!
shadowbndg 2007-04-12 ch 6,	abuseSo... is this fic abandoned or what? If it is I just want to let you know that I feel the utmost contempt for you and everyone else who starts a fic but then discards it leaving it unfinished. This goes double for those who create good or great fics such as this one. You should all have your legs beaten with baseball bats. If it is not then please ignore the above rant.
Vilkath 2007-03-13 ch 6,	abuseNot to bad of a story, evil is truely evil. Good is a bit grey. Ryoga is embracing the dark side.. all around wierdness. Overall my only real complaint is the story has been discontinued.. or at least halted. The pacing of the story is a bit slow, about 60k words and the plot has barely gotten any where. Really anoying if you consider the lack of updates. I still have some hope for this story though, and I like the route your going. Ranma being able to help the sailor scouts, without really following the usual paths of .. training them.. becoming a scout himself.. or just being stronger then them. Overall I am rather impressed by how many SM/Ranma cross over cliche's you managed to avoid.
Ranchee 2007-02-27 ch 6,	abusegood story so far i like that ranma is not super strong .I cant wait to see whats with royaga,and please update.
RanmaChaos 2007-02-24 ch 6,	abusegREAT cHAPTER!! pLEASE CONTINUE TO uPDATE!!
Blackdex 2006-07-27 ch 6,	abuseI like it so far, not much else to add. Ciao
Taeniaea 2006-06-07 ch 6,	abuseI Love The Chapter:6 Plz Plz Update It Soon!
Nightcrawler2000 2006-04-21 ch 6,	abuseyo
Dreamlight 2006-03-15 ch 6,	abuseI don't even like Sailor Moon, but I love this story. Good job, and I hope to see more, and soon!
Shlandria 2006-02-22 ch 6, anon.	abuseThis story is grate!
Bobboky 2006-02-21 ch 6,	abusecool

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