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| wings.glued.on 2008-07-02 ch 10, | abusethis was positively fascinating. Favorited. |
| you.broke.a.promise 2008-06-17 ch 3, | abusem. amazing, as always. |
| you.broke.a.promise 2008-06-17 ch 2, | abuseAw. Shika. :( |
| you.broke.a.promise 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseOh wow. Beautiful. |
| SakuraDouble 2008-05-05 ch 10, | abuseAnyone can throw a kunai, Tenten thinks, and chucked it forcefully, Anyone. Tenten doesn’t have a home. (but this is where she belongs) AW! -CRIES AGAIN- |
| SakuraDouble 2008-05-05 ch 9, | abusedo you think that fearing death is cowardice? Of course not. Now I want to comfort Kankuro. There's something wrong when you try to comfort fictional characters. |
| SakuraDouble 2008-05-05 ch 8, | abuseShizune always aims for the knees, and isn’t fighting for Tsunade, to whom she is now only loyal because of necessity, and the knowledge that unchecked, the woman would do terrible things. She feigns immobility when Kabuto knocks her down again, knowing it’s safer. (i will survive) Shizune kicks ass. Everyone knows this. |
| SakuraDouble 2008-05-05 ch 7, | abuseDamn you. Making me cry even freaking more about the obsolete characters! |
| SakuraDouble 2008-05-05 ch 6, | abuseYou made me cry- poor Shino. |
| sophia666 2008-04-25 ch 10, | abuseGreat story. I really loved the characters you showed, you really got them. I especially loved Hanabi, who has her own fight, that we don't see. Great writing. |
| Hiei's Cute Girl 2008-04-12 ch 10, | abuseWow! You've got a rather unique point of view. And I mean that in the good way. Never thought of Shizune being that way, that's for sure. ^^ I liked it a lot! |
| sailordarke 2008-04-12 ch 6, | abuseHave I told you before that you're very evil? I was checking my e-mail, stumbled across this in my Inbox, read it and all of a sudden can't work on my story anymore. Because you HAD to go and put Sakura in Shino's chapter. Wah...now I want to read ShinoSaku. Or write it, as I'm not feeling very picky right now. Maybe my readers will forgive me. |
| AGENT JAZZ 2008-04-11 ch 10, | abuseasdfjkl LOVED THIS. Not as much as Shino's one (you can probably guess why), but dear god, this was brilliant. And I'm really sad that this was the last one, but glad in a way, I suppose. Keeping it short and sweet was a good idea. You are such a brilliant writer. I envy you like mad. |
| AGENT JAZZ 2008-04-11 ch 6, | abuseOh God, that last sentence just kills me and makes me want to murder everyone who doesn't love/appreciate Shino. POOR BABY. I want to kill Sakura now. I love this chapter like you have no idea. So much so that I can't properly write a coherent review now, and I can't even recite what parts I love the most, otherwise I would basically be copying and pasting the whole damn thing out again. Thank you, so so so so much. I lovez you. |
| Jenna 2008-04-08 ch 10, anon. | abuseThat was great. I liked it and I think ending it with your fav made it really strong. |