i always know a good story when I read super slowly and savor each word. And then when I'm done, i go back and read it again. AWESOME FIC!!

Great story loved it.

"Hello, Lois," he says.

Swell! ^^

That was an amazingly awesome alter-ending. I have to admit, I was a bit disappointed that the story ended before we were able to see what Lois's reaction would be when she meets Clark again at work, but your ending was pretty good too. :)

Oh, it's very nice to see Martha's reaction. And I'm really happy you showed us the revelation scene as well. I love the quietness of the whole flashback.

Martha's tearfilled smile was also perfect. :)

great story

I loved the first instalmen :)

Aww. I loved your finish. Hehehaha! Awesome possum.

Molly

Wow. This one-shot felt like it was a prelude to something really great. lol What a tease!

Very nice job re-working the end to SR. I'm also impressed by the reveal, especially Lois' reaction to the information. This story (and this reader!) begs for another chapter =D

that was so cute ;)
keep em coming gal, cant wait for the next chapter

I really liked that!! Great job!

Ooh, very nice! I love it!

Terrific. A refreshing, inventive, and poignant little vignette. Thank you for posting this!

This is amazing. Your other story is saved in my favorites folder (to be read, and re-read), and this one is even better than the last.

I'm guessing this is a one-shot...but I have to say, seeing the "ass kicking" Lois mentioned in the story would be awesome.

You can take that as shameless begging, if need be.