:o Wonderful ! I absolutely love this choice to go from long to short, from a complex beginning to a somewhat obvious (but in a good way^^) ending. *sends tons of love your way and favs*
Thank you so much for this gorgeous piece ! :D

Beautiful ! I just love the way the two drabbles respond to and complete each other. Bravo ! :D

kawaii!^^

I love how this all ties together, and I love how each chapter was rather short, getting shorter toward the end. It made each section all the more powerful, and forced the reader to focus on what you wanted to be seen.

All together brilliant.

Are you sure you were inspired by me? :o

ah, your style is amazing...and I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who puts little tiny bits up.

This is amazing. that is the simplest way to say it. your writing style is absolutely beautiful! I can't believe it has no reviews yet, because i think everyone (who is comfortable with the jinxmugen pairing of course) should read this. I would love to read more of your work!