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Reviews For: The End II

emmalea21
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseYou killed Amber! Didn't expect that. That was so well written; I was almost in tears. Hex was written really well; I felt so sorry for him. Well done.
Blackfishy
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseaw that was brilliant
and so sad
but amazing!

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kat priestley
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseThis was soo good, its beautifully written - great job!!
Elledreamer
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseOh wow that was so good! I really didn't know who you were going to kill, it was such a shock! I thought you wrote hex SO well in this, just right. I loved how Amber didn't talk to Hex before she died because it wouldn't happen perfectly but it was just so emotional! Well done!

Oh, and I'm a bit happy because you didn't kill the person I was going to kill, so now I can still kill them *laughs evily* lol.

Brilliant writing, totally great to read. Well done!
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