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| emmalea21 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseYou killed Amber! Didn't expect that. That was so well written; I was almost in tears. Hex was written really well; I felt so sorry for him. Well done. |
| Blackfishy 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseaw that was brilliant and so sad but amazing! x |
| kat priestley 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThis was soo good, its beautifully written - great job!! |
| Elledreamer 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseOh wow that was so good! I really didn't know who you were going to kill, it was such a shock! I thought you wrote hex SO well in this, just right. I loved how Amber didn't talk to Hex before she died because it wouldn't happen perfectly but it was just so emotional! Well done! Oh, and I'm a bit happy because you didn't kill the person I was going to kill, so now I can still kill them *laughs evily* lol. Brilliant writing, totally great to read. Well done! |