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| Susicar 2008-04-22 ch 11,  | abuseOh, Rhonda the brave, i love it! Shot but interesting how you show her inner feelings. |
| BitShifter 2008-04-16 ch 13, | abuseAll right! Now we should get to see Rhonda in action! |
| Susicar 2008-04-09 ch 10, | abuseRhonda at work helping Tara! I love it! And don't worry, i can wait (for this week at last) Well done,and thank for sharing. |
| Susicar 2008-04-07 ch 9, | abuseAh, at least a proof, but i fear for poor Tara... |
| Susicar 2008-04-07 ch 8, | abuseOH, this is terribly bad (the plot, not your work), i look forward to know the culprits... |
| kst1233 2008-03-30 ch 10, | abuseI'm sorry to say that there will be a short period between now and the next chapters. My schedule looks as if it's going to be extremly busy, but I promise to get the next few chapters out as soon as I can. I hope I'm not boring you all with the length of this story. I've tried to cut it a little bit, but I'm afraid if I trim off too much more, it will end very badly. Thanks again for the great reviews. |
| BitShifter 2008-03-29 ch 9, | abuseIf "Heart and Soul" was like "EastEnders", then this is like "Law and Order, SVU" ("Steed and King, Special Victims Unit"?). Nice backstory on Mirabelle, and the plot twist that makes this a Ministry affair (uranium). |
| kst1233 2008-03-27 ch 7, | abuseI'm sorry I haven't been able to add anything to the story lately. I haven't had a day off in nearly three weeks, but this weekend looks to be promising, so by Sunday there should be at least two if not three new chapters added. In the mean time, thank you all for your comments. Comments mean a lot to any writer, whether they be bad or good and constructive critiques help a great deal, especially when the writer (who is now running late for work!) doesn't take the time to go back and check previous chapters and finds out that they've screwed up their whole time line! I will make the attempts to fix this faux pau as soon as possible since it is integral to future chapters and stories. |
| Susicar 2008-03-25 ch 7, | abuseOh, such dream... well done (poor Tara...) |
| Susicar 2008-03-17 ch 6, | abuseI'm (more) terrified... Ah, the glares of Rhonda, you make me laugh when i imagine her... |
| Susicar 2008-03-17 ch 5, | abuseOh, the plot tickens, really. Interesting case (i'm terrified!) |
| Susicar 2008-03-17 ch 4, | abuseWell done again, the chat between Mother and setted is very vivid and dramatic (And i love Rhonda's rage too) |
| Susicar 2008-03-17 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter, very interesting plot too. |
| Susicar 2008-03-17 ch 2, | abuseThis second is better, i fear for poor Tara, but the love scene is so beautiful... perhaps in the near future she could wish remember this moment... |
| Susicar 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseOh, i liked this start (I am a rabid Tara-fan, and i love the final scene (i hope you can write more like this one). |