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kat priestley
2008-04-11
ch 3,
abuseaww poor Li!! She's always so bouncy and fun!! You write so well. Don'w worry about the updates - exams nd stuff are way more important!! Good luck!!
emmalea21
2008-04-06
ch 3,
abuseYou keep making me want to cry! You're really good at writing emotionally. I felt so sorry for Li; normally she's so bouncy and happy. Great chapter.
x.Princess.Eli.x
2008-04-06
ch 3,
abuseHey, good chapter!
Poor Li...
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x.Princess.Eli.x
2008-03-23
ch 2,
abusehey!
your story is really good - please update soon!
spinkle22
2008-03-17
ch 2,
abuseHey, good chapter! I know I've already read it, but you know, I might as well congratulate you again :P
emmalea21
2008-03-17
ch 2,
abuseYou nearly made me cry! That was really well written. Love the idea of having one character's POV per chapter. It'll give us a good understanding of what they're all going through. Well done on the reactions; seems exactly what they'd do and I could picture it all. Super job!
kat priestley
2008-03-16
ch 2,
abuseI really like the way you write, it's like your in the head of the characters and right now i really really want to hug Alex!! lol - really good... Hope you UD soon
Seeker Kze
2008-03-16
ch 2,
abuseThis chapter nearly made me cry!
I liked the flash back, it was well writen.
Good emotion too.
I love Hex D: :'(
kat priestley
2008-03-09
ch 1,
abusebrilliant... really good start i loved how it was from Amber's p.o.v ...hope you UD soon
emmalea21
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseThat was awesome. I think this is the only fic written entirely from only one characters point of view. Very good. What does D.O.A mean? I've seen it before but I'm not actually sure what the letters stand for. I'm guessing it's not good.
spinkle22
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseArgh no!! Not Hex!! It's really good though... I love how you wrote it from Amber's POV. What does DOA mean?
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