Heh, not bad. I haven't seen many parodies of Ico. Though the one Penny Arcade did some years ago was pretty funny... "I don't speak 'crazy **', alright?"

AWESOME! XD
I always figured Yorda was a bit sadistic for letting Ico almost kill himself without ever showing a bit of gratitude. This fic just proves my point. ^¬^

awesome and hilarious ^^ definitely a different outlook from Ico's point of view hehe

Feeling that things had to change

Have to. Mind those tenses. Otherwise, written at least competently, which is always nice to see. Keep at it.