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Reviews For: Her Eyes

AGENT KUMA-CHAN
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abuse...I feel guilty for my prompts...They must have given you a hard time...
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*glomps you* Either way, THIS IS WORTH THE WAIT! I like it...*sniffle* I love it...*sniffles some more* first time anything's been dedicated to me...
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*glomps again* I feel like I owe you something now.
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ANYTHING! DO NOT FEAR ASKING! EVEN IF YOU WANT ME TO FIND A UNICORN, I WILL DO IT!
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*runs around the house, excited*

...anyways, besides minor spelling mistakes, I really enjoyed it. The ending, especially how you described Sasuke and what Ino realized, was amazing.
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I'm jealous. But very happy. I do not deserve such an amazing story dedicated to me. ...darn, I think I'm filled with too much positive energy now...must find a release...
Laura-chan
2008-03-09
ch 1,
abuseAw, so moving, so full of emotion! I think you should write a sequel :D
Caring More Than You Know
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseKWAII.
That was the cutest thing ever.
INO-CHAN GO! XD
Did sasuke get the scars and such from sakura?
>_
ViOlEt-KaT
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseIt was okay. there were a couple of words that were missing letters... I think. But I knew what you meant. Are you going to continue it? I like the idea.
Sadbrowneyes976
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abusewhat happens next?!?!? does he get her? i really liked it, you wrote it really beautifully.
Kaity Yates
2008-03-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow that was so cute and i luv that song so much! u did good!
xoAerith
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuse>OMGLOVELOVE.

Wow, you totally didn't steal it, only added the element that I did. Which is, broken bastard Sasuke on his knees begging angel Sakura for forgiveness. Lovely, lovely. I'm so honored that you mentioned me. =D ♥
'What he was missing.' He was missing Sakura, that jerk-face. Beautiful.
-squeals and hugs it like it's her lovechild-
♥ Aer
And darn, you are SO beating me. -sulks-
snappleducated
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseI--

Nice way to smash your way back into fandom, oh JEEZ that was marvelous. Really. It was--so pretty, and wow, your writing's really changed while you were on a break but I think I kinda dig it. A lot.

A masterpiece.
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