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| SmileEmptySoul56 2008-07-18 ch 3,  | abuseThis story is awsome. Please continue it...and not end it. I've see you haven't updated in a while but, is there one in the near future?? |
| magooglersriot 2008-07-14 ch 3, | abuseOhh! This sounds like the start of a really good story! I hope you'll continue soon! |
| Brittany 2008-07-01 ch 3, anon. | abuseHello, Brittany again. So I finished your first fic and started reading the sequel, and I am VERY excited! Just thought I would let you know that you have a new fan! And hey, just because Revan is missing for four years doesn't mean you should wait that long to post, k? lol. Happy writing! |
| MisfitGirl13 2008-06-22 ch 3, | abuseI didnt even know this had started..That's what I get for not adding you to my author list...No idea why i didnt though...ANYWHO, great first chapters! And I feel like all of the emotions are portrayed excellently. Love your writing style and cannot wait for more! |
| ChipFest 2008-06-21 ch 3, | abuseAw! Thats all there is so far?! Damn ;) Yeah, i dont read SW ffics usually, but i liked the prequel to this so... good job :D lol And I have never played KOTOR, though my sister is addicted (I dont play video games -shrug-) meaning the storylines are not very predictable for me haha. Anyways, its late at night and i need to sleep, so PLEASE update this soon! Cheerio, Chip~ |
| Meredith 2008-05-12 ch 3, anon. | abuse1. LOVE the story loved the 1st one too, im a huge carth reven fan and thanx so much for making a sequal when i read the 1st one and it just stopped i was like NO! caouse it was so good so thanx and i cant wait to read the rest of it 100 stars and tumbs up. (im bad at spelling sorry) |
| Selena Valentine Mars 2008-04-22 ch 3, | abuseOh, that was so good, you had me in tears. I knew that you could do it again serinity and I never doubted that. Keep 'em coming, I'll keep reading. |
| AngelofSnow 2008-04-20 ch 3, | abuseGo Mission! I really liked how she stood up to Revan there. It's shows her character is growing and maturing. |
| AngelofSnow 2008-04-20 ch 2, | abuseAww, that letter was so sweet. I did not expect Mission and Zalbaar to stow away on the ship. |
| AngelofSnow 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI just found your new story from the note you posted to Beautiful Darkness. I'm really happy you're continuing the story right where Beautiful Darkness left off. |
| Promised Flower 2008-04-15 ch 3, | abuseI really like this so far. It brings up some issues I thought about when I heard Revan left. I also like anything to do with Carth. :) And Mission has always been one of my favorite characters, so I'm glad you decided to include her in this story. Can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Anaya 2008-04-15 ch 3, anon. | abuseWell, this is certainly getting interesting, seeing as Mission's not exactly wrong in what she says... Looking forward to the next chapter. :) |
| Silkwind 2008-03-17 ch 2, | abuseSorry I did not comment on the first chapter. I am now. It is good seeing you back again. Nice start, Oh,! What are you going to do with Big Z and Mission? Looking forward to that twist and the next chapter. |
| Anaya 2008-03-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseAgain, enjoyable chapter. Ties in nicely with Canderous's appearance in KotOR II and the distinct lack of Mission and Zalbaar. Someone needs to give Carth a hug... |
| Anaya 2008-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abuse*deep breath* YES! Right, that being said *blushes*, I'm over the moon to see the sequel up. I haven't got anything useful to say I'm afraid, but I will say that there's definitely been no decline in quality since the end of Beautiful Darkness. :) |