I love this story! you've managed to get human!Bella without making her completely ooc, which is not something I've managed to find before. I also really liked your writing style, it was very descriptive. I know you haven't updated in years, but I certainly hope you take it up again! I want to read more.

I'VE ONLY JUST REALISED YOU'VE UPDATED! I'M SOO SORRY!

I am SO glad you have - this is a really brillaint story.

The whole thing with Rodolphus claiming she was innocent was very powerful - it shows his feelings for her and his personality very well.

Plus the thing with Alice... wow...

And how Sirius told her about Lily; I think that showed how close he and Bella are very well.

PPLLEEAASSEE update soon!

x

told you i'd log in! lol, you may have guessed but i actually think i may be slightly insane! ]

OMG! i love it so much! btw my fanfiction name is tarak795, i love writing and reading stories about bellatrix, sorry i didn't reveiw on more than one but i always reveiw on the last chapter i read, i'm gonna log in and add this to my favourites, its AMAZING! carry on writing! PLEASE!

OMG YOU'RE NOT DEAD

Now that i've said that, I still love this fic and cand want to see more!

Yay finally D

Nice )

This is surprisingly turning into one of my favourite fics even though I hate blackcest particuarly Sirius/Bella. But the Bella/Voldemort part is amazing your Voldemort is so incharacter though it would be nice to see him do something a little less evil to poor Bella. Can't wait for them to be reunited asuming they do.

I really hope you update soon, less Sirius/Bella would be nice however it dosen't matter if others or yourself prefer it this way. Though I did like it when she threw herself at him because she missed Voldemort in a strange way. Perhaps she could even call out the wrong name in a critical moment, lol

Love the story

Is there gonna be more bellatrix/voldemort? :)

One of the best chapters yet, I have to say. For some reason, I loved the line 'she buys chocolate bars off of him that taste ever so slightly like her master’s lips.'

Also, the way Bella views Muggles - I can just see that - and tortured Alice. 'has anyone ever told you how beautiful you are?' God, that is such a Bellatrix line.

So, Sirikins, Bella-boo and dearest Dumbles are off for a chat. Can't wait! Maybe Dumbledore should try and get Bella to reveal information on the Death Eaters...? Just a little idea...

Oh, and some Bellamort flashbacks in the next chapter would be good. You're good at writing evil!Voldy. But... there isn't really any other kind of Voldy, is there? ]

Update soon!

Ellie x

Yay an update! You know I love this story, and this chapter was great. It was cool how you talked about Bella's life in the muggle village, I wouldn't have been able to do that w/o sounding boring, but you did it fine. I love the name Alice!

Hot!

It was a long wait, but that was such a good chapter!

The flashback was a bit creepy, though.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

This was a good chapter. Will Bella ever make it back to her 'master'? In any case, thanks for the chapter, and please update again soon. I'm interested in where this is going.

I've never really liked the Bella/Sirius pairing, but it's really starting to grow on me w/ this story. Update soon please!

I've been reading for a while now but I couldn't wait any longer to point out how I LOVE that half the titles are lines from John Mayer songs! I love John Mayer almost as much as I love HP, so together it's AMAZING. This story is really good, btw. Bella is so hard to write in character, but you're doing a great job! I'll keep reading!