 clow-san 4/29/11 . chapter 30There is something about Balthier and Ashe together that is incredibly sexy and beautiful. This sets of one-shots certainly captured that. You have a wide-range of emotions packed into such bite-size stories. Great job. |
 clow-san 4/29/11 . chapter 8Can't stopped giggling! Hehe. My gosh this is precious. |
 clow-san 4/29/11 . chapter 7Ah yes. The infamous skirt. Haha. Lovely |
 clow-san 4/29/11 . chapter 6Hehe. If I were Ashe, I'd thrown something heavier at him. Like my throne. |
 clow-san 4/29/11 . chapter 4Aww... I would expect less with their child. |
 clow-san 4/29/11 . chapter 2This one made me all squishy and warm. |
 clow-san 4/29/11 . chapter 1Ah. Such a perverted mind you have, Balthier. |
 Nataleia 11/9/10 . chapter 5Ah, I can so Imagen chapter 5 happening to them. I love every one of these stories (: Amazing. |
 SpaceRoses 9/25/09 . chapter 30Great work! I really enjoyed every one of these stories. They're fun, fresh and interesting. I also like how every one of them isn't about sex. Sure Balthier and Ashe probably had it and -are- attracted to each other but there' more to a relationship then sex. I love how you caught all the little moments and the like.
I really like the one where she got confused and hurt him...I have to admit that scenario has popped into my head before while playing. I also love the one where he's visiting her grave...so sad...but so pretty. And Vaan's fear of waking up Basch...most amusing. I -love- the Star Wars tribute in the last chapter...that set me giggling.
Great work all the way around...I really enjoyed this set! Awesome job on all fronts! |
 MidnightReader1 5/12/09 . chapter 30hey, great story haha i couldnt stop laughing from start to finish:D i love the idea of them all being one-shots it was a brillant idea. i cant wait to read more of your stories. Keep up the good work! xx |
 piratelore 1/24/09 . chapter 27This chapter is hilarious. It surely ranks up there out of all these chapters :) |
 stephanie 7/5/08 . chapter 30 omg i loved all your stories! i was so happy to find 30 stories of this pairing. :) |
 SkyNinjaPirate 6/17/08 . chapter 30this was so good! lovely! |
 ashe95 3/10/08 . chapter 30 I loved each and every one. Nice Star Wars touch on the last one. Great collection you have here. |
 Riny Beoulve 3/9/08 . chapter 1I was so happy to see these altogether, along with a couple that I've missed along the way.
I still have to say, one of my favorites is where Balthier has his "lady friend" and Vaan ends up in the chocobo stable and the last line is "at least someone understood him". It's so adorable. |