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| Jamica 2008-03-28 ch 2, | abuseLove it! Cool storyline, and thank you that you mentioned my name, it made my heart jump ^^ I haven't found any grammer or spelling mistakes, but maybe you should, in some cases of long sentences use a comma. And btw, english is my second language too :P |
| TopazledHannah-kun 2008-03-27 ch 2, | abuseO, interesting story so far. It's really good. Easy to understand and follow, but not too simple. It also strings you along quite easily. Well written story! I look forward to more chapters! ~TH-K ^^ |
| Jamica 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseThis story captured me with the very first sentence, and held me till the last, when it released me with a cliffhanger and I wanted to stay in it's arms. Cool story, I'd love to see the next chapter! (and you had less errors than the average native writer) |