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Jamica
2008-03-28
ch 2,
abuseLove it! Cool storyline, and thank you that you mentioned my name, it made my heart jump ^^
I haven't found any grammer or spelling mistakes, but maybe you should, in some cases of long sentences use a comma.
And btw, english is my second language too :P
TopazledHannah-kun
2008-03-27
ch 2,
abuseO, interesting story so far.

It's really good. Easy to understand and follow, but not too simple. It also strings you along quite easily. Well written story!

I look forward to more chapters!

~TH-K ^^
Jamica
2008-03-09
ch 1,
abuseThis story captured me with the very first sentence, and held me till the last, when it released me with a cliffhanger and I wanted to stay in it's arms. Cool story, I'd love to see the next chapter! (and you had less errors than the average native writer)
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