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Reviews For: PolkaDotted Jellyfish

Weener1
2008-03-09
ch 1,
abuseWow! That was so full of awesome description~

The Hawaii sure sounds tasty!~

-Jay
Fade to Osaka
2008-03-09
ch 1,
abuseIt was good, and everyone was very in character (especially Yukari) but the spacing was kind of annoying. Keep writing!
Mr Xvious
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abusehaha! That was great, a really good read! keep it up! :)
EvilDux
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseI love this. It's awesome. :3 It's great to read something wholesome that isn't girl-on-girl slash(though I do like that too).
I love how you described things, especially the photo. Really great mental picture that made me lol.

Over all, it was pretty interesting. The only thing I would change in the future is the formating, as everything is squooshed together and my eyesight isn't that great to begin with.

I look forward to your future works!
~'Dux
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