This...is so depressingly cute >//<
(is depressingly a word?)

I caught a few mistakes here and there, but overall I loved it~

I thought the same thing when I was reading that chapter earlier today..but to add a Kurofai twist to it? Just awesome.
XD

Beautifully writen!
When I found those challange entry in kuroxfai community archieve, I'm going straight to this story, because I really fall in love with Kobato!

And after I read it, I feel more happy because the role you gave for Kuro and Fay just perfectly fitting!

And I almost going to cry when I reach the ending.. that's just awesome!

Aw. :D Adorable. Thank you for sharing a really well written story.

amazing. not only Fay-son-of-yakuza-boss-and-Kuro-cop-verse but also broken hearts part. it was really great (and sad, I think I'll go and weep in the corner now)
p.s. Fay's leukemia can be cured right?

Good luck on the spring challenge~ what a sweet entry :D

and an interesting story! I love happy endings~ Keep up the good work!

Kobato is so cute--! :D Is this story going to be a series of vignettes, with each one focusing on how she got her wounded heart pieces, or will it follow Kurogane and Fai's story?

Only noticeable grammatical error: "It would get worst and worst" -> "Worse and worse", I believe? And I'll also point out the "peices" where it should be "pieces"--unless there is some meaning behind that? :P

Looking forward to see how this continues. :)

This is really sweet.

Did you write this for the Spring Challenge?

Nice fic.

*wipes eyes* So sweet! And I love how the situation really does sound like something Kobato would incounter and Ioryogi having to explain to her. I loved it! I... honestly don't have anything else to say, except you used some words a few too many times but WHO CARES?! It was too cute! Too cute, too cute, too cute!

Nobody can go wrong with Kobato, in my opinion. *nod nod*