Well, that was an unexpected visit. Incredibly cute, though. She knows no one on the face of Mobius can resist the innocence. This is one of the few stories that actually is keeping my attention throughout; always seeming to leave me at some type of cliffy by the end of the chapter... never ending hook. I really like it so far; you've even made a character like Chris seem cool and likeable, respectively. That's a hard thing to pull of sometimes. The way you've written this is remarkable, it's just the the style that won't let me tear my eyes off it. Anyway, I'm probably chewing your ear off now, I'll zip it. :p
Good job!

~UnwrittenTale

...Gah. Finding such a... well written, well thought out, interesting story in the Sonic fandom that doesn't bash Chris is... *squeal* I thank you greatly for sharing such a wonderful piece of writing with us!

Love it! I'm so happy you don't hate Chris !

I knew that the mystery was getting to big to be totally wrapped up in one story. At least, there is going to be a sequel, but really, you love these cliffhangers. Good luck on the sequel! I can't wait to see what you have got in store.

Aaw it's over?! Well at least a super awesome sequel is comin'! I can't wait!~

Great story so far! Vyt..um..question.. why did Alisa's last name change to Crowley? I thought it was Armstrong?

This is a pretty good story. I hope that the sequel will come soon.

That's the end?

Heheh, was very good! You revealed a lot about this 'Master' and his plans and also revealed a bit of the anomoly with Chris.

It was intensely intriguing! I cannot wait for the next part! You may have to send me a PM saying that you posted it or I'm more than likely to miss it...

Wonderful job on this entire story!

~Fantomo

WOW! I did not see this coming...

So I assume the professor mentioned earlier in the story is the girl that Caulk and his master captured and are going to talk to? And that Chris has the last piece of the Master Emerald IN HIS CHEST?

Wow. Those are just my hunches. I can't wait to see if they're right!

I am so excited for the sequel! Please start it soon!

Sincerely,
BlueandRedButterflies

I love this story and i cant wait for the sequal

Great job. I loved this story and I know you'll do just as good if not better on the next story. ^_^

and you have no idea how long i have waited for you to write that line! YES! IT HAS BEEN SAID, IM IN HEAVEN! XD Tell me the title of the second chap so dat i can keep my eyes out for it! I can't wait, I'm so excited! XD lol I loved this chap! Upload the nxt story soon, k? Ja ne ^_^

Odd choice of place to stop I thought. Although it was getting long there's very little to hang an "end" on here. Not sure what the sequel will gain by being a sequel rather than more chapters on this one.

Still, mechanics of layout aside the plot is moving along a-pace and is stil intriguing.

WAHH~ X3 That was a really great Epilogue~! I so can't wait to see more~.

See you next story!

OMG, it's done! It's actually done!

And... you left it on a freaking cliffhanger. How dare you?!

No, but in all seriousness, and epic and excellent end to a likewise fic. :) Look forward to the sequel. ♥