that was great

AW! *hits favorite button*

That was beautiful.

Keep Writing!
Shadow

Wow that was good.

Mostly, new characters don't really work very well, but I think u pulled it off. I would dare to write more if I was you. Same here, I watched Newsies like yesterday, and I can't stop watching it.

Must be those hip-thrusts in the choreography, HAHA.

Sorry I couldn't submit a signed review, I have a fictionpress, check it out.

Oh my gosh! SO cute! I absolutely love this!

Wow. Brilliant. It's very impressive that you were able to portray Spot in love without making him OC. Wow. :D I'm very curious as to what happened before this, with them getting to know one another and all. *hint hint* :D

Awesome story! I personally loved it, because it showed that side of Spot that people normally don't depict well, but you did a great job! I think this is good where it is; a sweet little oneshot that makes people feel warm and fuzzy on the inside at the end. Ahem. .:raises hand:.

Anyway, this was a great story. Good job!