I really love this. It's just so... so sweet. It made me cry. I dunno, I get emotional over those stories where the main character leaves everyone else. Well awesome job!

I like it a lot :) I especially liked Rhonda's, you really got into her character well. Sid expelled? :( I wonder how that happened. Obviously, you'll get into it. Anyway, please update soon!

The letters make me sad...
They are extremely, srsly well written. PLEASE UPDATE!

Nice Suzie, I think she was very in character, and I like the way you described what the Sunsed Arms had become -- it shows that you really submerged into its life.

The only paragraph I don't like is the one where Suzie tells about Oskar. Maybe you described Oskar correctly, but still a woman wouldn't use these words when writing about her husband.

Marvelous job with Suzie. Nice description of the house's situation, and good use of her POV.

Keep the good writing

#waves hand dramatically at computer like a crazy lady*Your so good at this.

I quite liked Suzie. You did a really good job with her voice; she's a little optimistic, but also a bit of a realist. It's a pretty cool mixture; I'm surprised that more writers haven't tried playing around with her character.

Nicely paced chapter; it's really endearing, in so many ways. Lurve it, lurve it, lurve it. Can't wait for more!

-Pointy_O

I liked this chapter. Suzie seemed in character, you did well with this. I think I may have an idea of who's sending the donations, I hope I'm right. =P
Update soon!

I'm very sad that Gertie died... But this was a very good chapter. I think that you did a very good job of trying to get into the shoes of a grown, struggling woman.

Can't wait for whoever's next!

VM

This is very, very nice. I like how you've updated everyone in this chapter, as well as giving us the background in the one before. I was surprised that Rhonda was the second letter-sender! Ah, well, it all fits.

Can't wait for more! This is a great idea!

~VM

Ah, I find these letters to be interesting. And good. Very good. Perfectly in character and everything. I shall look forward to more of them. :]

Update ASAP!

this is great! i love rhonda's point of view, you captured her spirit perfectly :) i can't wait to read more of this!

Gah! You are so cool! I feel like you live down the street from me, and ic an go to your house and hang out and raid your fridge. But I can't. Sigh.

Anyways, this is one amazing piece of awesomeness you've got here. Nicel (haha...my dad just popped in and started bustin' my chops for having the lights on, and I'm al like "Dad! i am reviewing right now! Kindly take your leave!" So..now I'm in teh dark. AndI'm not sure why I decided to share that. i just did. Back to the review) first chapter; I loved that we found out a little of where and what Arnold's up to, but not every detail. Nice and subtle. And your portrayal of Rhonda and Gerald's voices were perfect! I could hear them inside my head as I was reading...and it wasn't the normal voices I hear, it was, you know...nevermind. Great story, overall, and I can't waitt o read more. Bravo!

-Pointy_O

Fantastic start. Please update soon. :D They're so in character.

I really liked this letter. Perfect Rhondaness all the way; she certainly writes as she talks, but still shows she really cares.

Sid expelled... no big surprise here. Maybe he made a scandal from hearing noises at the janitor closet and thought it was a ghost, and resulted to be the principal's son making out with the janitor's daughter... nothing good for anyone involved.

Keep the good writing.

I love that. Eugene's gay? That's intense, hardcore, and epic, all at once! You have exhasted my bank of supaa-awesome words with one little chapter. Thanks a lot. XD
I love it, update soon.