|Reviews for Just A Short Little Trip|
| USAFChief 4/25/13 . chapter 1
I've been reading your stuff for about a week now without a review - guess I'll have to go back and let you know that I think most of it is pretty damn good. This, however, was utterly fantastic! I loved it. Horny dwarves? Whoever woulda thunk it? Hilarious. Extremely well done. We need more crack!fic.
Thanks for posting this and all your other work, too.
| Ali 7/15/10 . chapter 1
I think I saw this a long time ago, when I was a new Rayne fan. I just stumbled on it again and read it. It's so freaking funny. Very cool fic. :)
| Anonymous 11/28/08 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness! I was laughing SO hard my stomach hurt...Bad, I don't think you should doubt yourself as to whether or not you have a talent for this sort of thing. Just write another amazing story like this. The part with Jayne wanting to clean Vera with antiseptic wipes...ROFL!
| DSDragon 7/23/08 . chapter 1
This fic is HI-LARIOUS!
| unlock.your.heart 3/13/08 . chapter 1
That was really funny! I loved it!
| Ellisguy 3/9/08 . chapter 1
I liked the humor in your story. Horny dwarves terrorizing the crew of Serenity! Ha! It was quite refreshing as a lot of the stories here tend to be dark, serious, and quite angsty. I liked the references to Mal/Inara, Jayne/River, and Kaylee/Simon pairings. Also the camraderie between Jayne and Simon was surprising, but I felt worked with the overall light-heartedness of the story. Hope to read more from you.
| BlueEyedBrigadier 3/9/08 . chapter 1
Gotta say...that was quite the Jossian effort. Crazy as a fox but definitely with a hidden message:D
| Fififelicity 3/9/08 . chapter 1
Hilarious! I loved it!
| queenjane516 3/9/08 . chapter 1
hahahahahaha, don't worry, this was beautiful :-) anything you write is gold-you can do no wrong
| jcap1526 3/8/08 . chapter 1
"she violated Vera!"
(dabs eyes with tissue)
Poor traumatized Jayne. LOL Great fun to read; do it again please!
| nomad62 3/8/08 . chapter 1
No clue how the prompt stories work so can't help ya on whether or not you did it right but it was right shiny by me.
| Bao Bei Tony 3/8/08 . chapter 1
Shredded underwear, horny little people and Unseemly uses of engine grease. Bad you are Bad!.
I loved it and Laughed my butt off Look there it is way over there.
I guess I gotta do one now.
| Thug-4-Less 3/8/08 . chapter 1
Is there a right way to do this sort of thing? It flowed well and was quite hilarious.
| Love Of My Life 3/8/08 . chapter 1
I liked it... what's not to like... I thought it was a hoot and a half ;)
| michebabyblue 3/8/08 . chapter 1
wow this is so funny especially loved the Zoe and Inara bits as they are the most reserved people on the ship.