...about your A/N at the end...

I do belive you're hallusinating..._ Good fic! Keep it up!

Very good...I wish I was such a character-magnet! (Strains of music float through my mind: "Aoi kaze ga ima Mune no door wo tataetemo...") Rei has not even glanced my way, so I can't really tell you if I think she's IC here... I do know, however, that this is one of the most emotionally attatching fics I've read. You are a master at getting your audience to understand exactly what your freinds have told you...I have nothing more to say...keep it up!

interesting story

Nice. Very ing nice. How 'bout letting me use this for my Rei shrine? (I'd give you the url but it ain't up yet)...lemme know.

Nice. Very nice. The imagery works well, especially with an abstract thinker like Rei-although you could give us more psychological depth and less of an "instant replay from a new angle" and nobody would complain. Construction was good-although you need to work some on punctuation, such as the difference between dashes and hypens, and comma placement. But since that and the awkward phrase "Pain claimed her parts" is all the Mad Editor can find to gripe at, you've obviously been careful. Good work... and keep on improving. It'll be a joy to read.

THat was so amazing. I have never read about rei... like that before. She's never seemed anything but sort of... dead. NOt really real. And you gave life to her death-like state. Wow. Email me, please, I really wanna talk to ya. _

I like this story. It shows something of Rei in it that most authors don't capture.

you write so beautifully

Nice. I like it.

good insight into Reis charecter.