wow...thats all i can say just wow

I love the style of writing and the narration of this. Poor Sakura, you're left with no choice but to pity her being used. I hope someone (perhaps Kakashi, or maybe even Sakura, that may be even better) gives Sasuke a nice, long, beating for using Sakura like that.

Lovely first two chapters, I can't wait to read more. Keep it up!

Aww that is kind of sad, but a good description of their relationship anyway. That is alot like what it might be like if they did get together. I really enjoyed this chapter, it has me guessing what comes next. Great work, and can't wait for an update.

-k.R.

I LOVE THIS FIC, KEEP GOING. WHAT CAN I SAY I HATE SASUKE. WILL YOU EVER GIVE HIM A HEART OR EVEN MAKE HIM POSSESSIVE OF SAKURA, ONCE KAKASHI COMES INTO THE PICTURE? THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!

I can't wait for Kakashi in the next chapter! :)

"You don't smoke Sasuke..." in my personal guesses, that says a lot. Is Sasuke stuttering in his own mind, hence the pause?

And I do hope that everything she thought in Icha Icha was false..well, I hope she gets it and I'm interested to see how it all even comes up around Kakashi.

;)

Good descip of Sasuke. Really believable.

this may sound terribly jaded of me but it is so refreshing to read about sex that is not romantic and earth shattering and fairy tale perfect. I really enjoy your realism and I hope you keep it even when kakashi and sakura have their inevitable lemon

Makes me feel sorry for Sakura. Looking forward to Kakashi's appearance. Nice chapter, sweetie!

First, I love the vehicle and fuel part- simply smart. Smut tour? Sure, why not and obviously the story that goes with it. People seem to forget about that. Not all smut is simply it's own story...and Sakura seems to be proving that already. I'm looking forward to Sasuke's reasons...and I see SasuNaru- ahh haa. Ahh, Sakura. Will there be yaoi- as in ecchi man sex? Fabulous if there will be.

I dig Sakura's emotions in this. Ever the one to need to heal others. Hmm.

Excited about this one. And by the first look at this chapter, the plot could very well be epic in and of itself it it brings out some SasuNaru- their own personal realizations I mean...then again their pairing could all be in flashback.

;)

Hm very very intriguing so far. Interested to see how Kakashi handles everything. I'm hooked already. Please update soon!

Great start, from my understanding later chapters you will tell us why Sasuke is acting in this manner. More important is why is Sakura allowing him to do this to her.

OMG this is so dark and... I LIKE IT! XD Keep it up. I cannot wait to read more.

Wow. Very intriguing. I look forward to seeing what part kakashi will play in this

O_O Now that came entirely unexpected) I'm curious about then next part already) Geez, your made Sasuke look like such a bastard)